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Prayers Among Metal's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #37 | 3.478 | 3.478 |
| Flow & Clarity | #42 | 2.870 | 2.870 |
| Overall | #46 | 2.986 | 2.986 |
| Adherence to Theme | #48 | 2.609 | 2.609 |
Ranked from 23 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This was wonderful, the tell of the machine not having a mind to prob was a good addition and with the protagonist brushing it off it was easy to do the same.
the good
it was a well paced and enjoyable ride.
Your characters seemed grounded and made ease. You captured the grim dark very well.
The constructive thought
This definitely walked a line as far as adhering to theme. But that is it. I thinks the rest was very good and despite the subversion I think it overall was worth it for the plot.
Does not even getting to make an alliance count as unlikely allies? Still, a really good story. The curtain pull at the end was up there with the Flesh-Eaters bit on another tale involving Elves.
That's a fair criticism. I imagined that the idea was Robots were working with actual Blessed Sisters (though they didn't realize it) by replacing their leadership.
nice pair
the protagonist was written very well. I like how you portrayed the soulsnatcher cult. I enjoy the subversion of the prompt. Personally I would have liked a little bit more foreshadowing to the betrayal but it may have messed up the reveal. Overall it is a really good story.
I liked the distrust the psychic had against the "general" and how you portrayed it. It seemed realistic and fitting.
Hi Pixxy, did you upload the story properly as there is no download button?
(Just thought I'd leave a comment to make sure it was ok for when the judging started. :) )
Sorry didn't realize my email wasn't verified so it didn't allow it lol
I don't think I verified mine! :o
Is mine working, its called The Hunt?
Yeah yours is working