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A jam submission

My devilish darlingView project page

Submitted by adamtheteferi — 11 minutes, 41 seconds before the deadline
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Play book

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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concepts & Originality#243.7783.778
Adherence to Theme#353.4073.407
Overall#423.1113.111
Flow & Clarity#532.1482.148

Ranked from 27 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

This conjured up memories of Modest Medusa, only with a more adult human age level. The ability to shapechange between Giant Snek/Lamia/Teeny Hooman forms was a mood too. Would have been good to be shown why she thought Paul was 'the coolest human' than just be told. Show don't tell is a good rule to follow. It also makes stories feel less like an author just singing unfounded praises for their characters like some awful movie and television lines out there.

Submitted(+4)

Really, really love the idea. Great sense of humor, despite the grim setting. The characters are really great, too. You have a lot of potential--I'd strongly encourage you to learn more (formally) about writing. If you could organize your paragraphs, sort your punctuation, and keep your tenses consistent, this could be fantastic!

Submitted(+1)

I second this almost completely!

Submitted

Agreed!

Submitted

I agree as well!