I enjoyed this, especially getting to see the main character have a real moment of truth at the end. I think it's hard to do character growth in such a short space but I liked how you showed it.

One of the better set ups thus far in the Jam, held back slightly by a few grammatical errors, and unfortunately not featuring an abundance of unlikely allies  teaming up until the last paragraphs.

Still, I had a great time.

Fast friends from fighting furry fiends from forest flight. Making friends with the people he heard didn't like their kind. Liked this one for the ending, and the journey the protag takes to get to that point.

You did a really solid job with the pacing - the amount of content was perfect for a story of this length and it didn't feel rushed or stretched.

It was a fun read and I enjoyed the story. The world-building helped this story feel like a small part of something larger. I will say though, next time read your story out loud and that will help iron out some of the less obvious kinks. 

That was fun to read. I enjoyed his seeming favorite phrase connected the beginning and the end well. 

Hope I get to read more of yours!