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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Correlation to theme | #551 | 2.782 | 2.941 |
Quality | #625 | 2.393 | 2.529 |
Overall | #638 | 2.237 | 2.365 |
Composition | #638 | 2.059 | 2.176 |
Impression | #643 | 2.003 | 2.118 |
Creativity | #647 | 1.947 | 2.059 |
Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Theme
Inside my world
Picture theme
How does it fit the theme?
Using both piano and synth in the song I feel like really matched the dreamy feel to the theme.
Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6lMKBYmYRO0
https://www.bandlab.com/post/f7ded0fc-7240-ef11-86c3-000d3a42581b
Number of tracks1
Genre
Ambient
Soundtrack use permission
Yes (CC BY)
Any project
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Comments
Sounds cute, a little exciting..... but a little monotonous.
Try adding more melodies!
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I really like how the track built up from the chord sequence, and how the arpeggios kept the movement going. I did find it a bit robotic though, and maybe adding in some changes of rhythm would have been nice to vary it. A lovely start though - I'd love to hear it developed more! Well done!
I think it sounds pleasant but I'd work on adding some variety ! But it's far from bad, I enjoyed listening to it, and it almost gave a sort of Icy vibe. Reminds me of the Zora temple in Ocarina of Time, thematically.
Nice job! I do think overall the harshness of the sounds takes away from how ambient it is -- removing some of the highs would help. And some more variety with harmony and/or instrumentation would make it even better.
love the melody and subtle build on this track. Very innocent and inspiring theme great work!
I liked the starry sounds but it did get a bit too repetitive.
Feels like you have a decent grasp on music theory! The core idea can def work for an ambient track with an easy-to-listen-to melody.
Still, this can benefit greatly from humanization. Adding velocity variety and timing imperfections here and there. I'd also consider adding more instruments and arranging them to introduce them over time. That should help the song feel like it's moving more and less repetitive.