Yeah, I definitely see room for a more interesting bass part. Thanks for the feedback!
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A lovely listen! My favorite track was "Umi and Her Mother", very interesting harmonically.
My main suggestion is more movement. The soundtrack tends to get a little static at times as most of the accompaniment is block chords. You do a good job at arpeggiating the piano part, would've loved to hear more of it.
Great work!
Did not expect what I did coming into this submission, but it definitely bangs!
The "How does this fit the theme?" reignited a memory I had when I was like six years old playing Cyborg Justice on my dad's Sega Genesis and being completely entranced by the intro cut scene.
I do agree with others about how this would fit into a game. More specifically, each track seems to have the same kind of vibe. Maybe an explanation of each track usage in the game would help in this regard.
The music itself, while a bit long, was very fun to listen to. My favorite was "Knocking Down Heaven's Door With Vengeance". Great work!
One of the most interesting compositions I have rated so far! The string playing was beautiful, was that recorded?
My only critique is that the mix almost sounded in mono except for the strings. It made it tough for my brain to place the instruments in the sound stage.
Thoroughly enjoyed my listen, great work!
Nice work! I liked your sound choices, made each track interesting to listen to, especially "The Oceans Floor". The low white noise really aids the ocean vibes.
I would've loved to hear more instrumental variety between each track. I think some more pronounced percussion would also make the soundtrack even better.
This soundtrack has a lot of character. It made it very easy to envision your game idea. I think you nailed the marine feeling! "Calming Waters" was my favorite, I was thinking of a trailer for your game in my head while listening to it haha.
One nitpick is I think some of the sounds (like the strings and pads) could have used more attack and release to add to the ambient vibes.
Awesome work!
Nice submission! There were a lot of harmonic ideas that I enjoyed, like the chord progression in “Inside My Guilt”. The constant trumpet falls in “Inside my World” were a little distracting. My favorite track was “Inside My Innocence”, loved the synth chords. You did a good job making each track have its own identity.
Good work!
Cool tracks! They fit with your game idea well. There was a lot of cool harmonic ideas which I enjoyed. Love the game idea and the cover art as well.
I think the boss battle themes could’ve used a little more energy, maybe some brass and harder percussion could help. And some more instrumentational variety would make the soundtrack even better.
Good work!
Absolutely loved the reversed instruments. “welcome to the deep” took me back to playing Super Mario Galaxy for the first time.
Great storytelling in the music. Compositionally was awesome. Just fantastic all around.
Awesome job, definitely one of my favorites so far out of nearly two hundred submissions.