Play Squiggly
Squiggly: Kids Math Games's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Unique Selling Point | #8 | 3.632 | 3.769 |
| Clarity | #17 | 3.113 | 3.231 |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #18 | 3.113 | 3.231 |
| Engagement | #23 | 2.520 | 2.615 |
Ranked from 13 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
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- I'm a sucker for incorporating games for learning, especially mathematics which was my kryptonite. I think it's a brilliant idea! However, I find that I loved the concept more seeing as I couldn't get a grasp of much of the gameplay... That would be the only thing I can pinpoint.
- Tweet needs a few more hashtags and you have really good video content, so i would include that with the tweet as well Great Pitch Deck and really like your project's concept
- Feedback submitted as Realms Games.
- Agree with Kro13: It's a really nice Pitch Deck! Can't find your Twitter profile. Definitely worth setting up if you don't have one, it's free and takes about 2 minutes. If you have Twitter, please link your #PitchYaPitch tweet in the comments and/or hit "Edit this submission" and paste the link. With the short pitch itself, we'd recommend a more engaging hook. "3D Math Practice for Kids 4–10" describes technically what it is. Maybe something like: "Your kids will have fun learning Math with this free and engaging game. Perfect for ages 4-10."
- Try adding some emojis and using a video instead!
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/LukasHoupt/status/1454088721733767169
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1T3_4BWSo3YYAjARkNc-3fJ0eMdj2baUQ?usp=sharing
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://www.squiggly.school/play-squiggly-math
Pitch Deck Link (DevLog Update)
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1iqEc28fkgL4pA0d6Aq-Z-TkRHEzyMEWP/view?usp=sharing
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Very cool premise but very little is known about how the game plays. Presskit seemed more of a pitch for the company than the game itself. After a bit I lost track if this was a pitch for a game or a business proposal for the company.
Pitch text is good + on point and the presskit is well presented! I have a very clear idea what your game is and who it's for. The only thing that's letting you down is the media of the Tweet isn't great. You should hand pick a short gif or a collection of 4 good screenshots for this if possible? Pick your most colourful seeing as the game is aimed at kids :)
Pitch deck and press kit are both really good, I think you would be able to use those to sell your idea really well to customers or investors.
For your tweet, you could try to figure out what hashtags work for your game genre. And add a catchy trailer to draw people's eyes and show them what the game is all about!
Feedback submitted as Realms Games.
Solid pitch deck
The tweet needs work but yeah guess that was mentioned
Really like your concept here
The pitch tweet isn't very well made. Could use a video and a description. Maybe use the previous winning Pitchyagame tweets as a template example for what to do?
+ I cannot wait to follow-up on the afterMATH of this project!
+ I think it bridges games + learning, useful for students and or growing children in general!
+Visually striking, especially for AR! That should be mad fun!
- Gameplay idea; video maybe?
- And yes, definitely set up a Twitter. I'd follow~
Resubmitted with my tweet! Would appreciate a follow :) https://twitter.com/LukasHoupt/status/1453725505920724999
Good work, nice pitch but maybe bettter to have more stuff like images and informaiton.
Also the twit is missing. But good luck for next run
I'll stay active! Thanks for the feedback- we'll give more info next time
Agree with Kro13: It's a really nice Pitch Deck!
Can't find your Twitter profile. Definitely worth setting up if you don't have one, it's free and takes about 2 minutes.
If you have Twitter, please link your #PitchYaPitch tweet in the comments and/or hit "Edit this submission" and paste the link.
With the short pitch itself, we'd recommend a more engaging hook. "3D Math Practice for Kids 4–10" describes technically what it is.
Maybe something like: "Your kids will have fun learning Math with this free and engaging game. Perfect for ages 4-10."
Thanks sm for the feedback! Just edited submission with tweet. I'll tweak hook for next time!! :)
Did not find the presskit and the tweet link, which are required by the rules. Nicke pitch deck though
Oops! Didn't notice that. Is it too late to resubmit? Thank you!
not too late I will circle back on this tomorrow to have a look
Just tweaked the tweet!!