Neat story! The quick ramp up with the room transitions was probably my favorite part. The second half was a bit flowery but it worked. The face of the "friend" was pretty creepy to begin with so I definitely appreciated the later changes.
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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Story | #16 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
Horror | #18 | 3.125 | 3.125 |
Aesthetics | #18 | 3.813 | 3.813 |
Enjoyment (Best Game) | #20 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
Sound Design | #33 | 2.875 | 2.875 |
Ranked from 16 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
I like the slow build up from "oh no my dear friend" to "Ah. I see. I see so much."
The slow fade in of the monsters is neat, but I think the big thing that got me was the friend's face. It was really cool and unexpected and I think I would like more of that :D
Really liked the "one asset" approach taken here. I didn't see the man in the window at first until the text told me, so I think I need a bit more feedback on that? Also, I find it hard to distinguish between narration and the character's dialog since the former is only marked by tildes. Other than that, it's a really simple scary read!
well, i'm actually not a fan of visual novel but this one is good! i really like that it's short haha
I think the music could have been louder. The low volume kinda lessened the atmosphere. Some scary sounds could have been cool along with the visuals.
The art was of course cool, especially (spoiler) the neon stuff. The scary face was decently scary too. Overall a nice submission.
Awesome art and suspense!
I was playing while I was sitting by the window. The game made me look back.
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