Interesting setting.

I like the Sci-Fi setting all though some of it was hard to visualize. Short and sweet and good use of the song as content, I'd say. Well done.

I think the prose could use some proofreading, but as an aesthetic experience this is really cool.

Super interesting concept, I hadn't heard of the holographic universe theory before and I enjoyed the atmosphere you created very much! 

There was a lot to like here. I'm a sucker for scifi worldbuilding and a lot of this was creating this world in which it's normal to have broken lines of communication and weird soul-eating power cores.

I feel like the main choice comes in relatively early - the "keep the same song" vs "change it" choice. I think about the role of aleatoric elements in art and I think that's such an interesting choice that I may explore what that choice changes.

The other choice - business vs. murder - I felt unprepared to make. There were some sinister overtones but that's part and parcel of a scifi setting. I wonder if calling it business was what led to the kind of left-turn ending I got that left me a bit puzzled instead of something that resolved the plot threads.