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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Art / Visual Design | #3 | 4.722 | 4.722 |
| Overall | #4 | 4.556 | 4.556 |
| Theme | #5 | 4.389 | 4.389 |
| Music / Sound Design | #8 | 4.056 | 4.056 |
| Writing / Narrative | #9 | 4.167 | 4.167 |
| Voice Acting | #13 | 1.778 | 1.778 |
| Creativity | #15 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I love the art so much! It's bright yet soft, very nice to look at. I kinda knew how the story would go, but still it's broken my fragile heart ( ; ω ; )
Dam that is one good short story. 10/10
Realmente hermoso juego, me hace apreciar el tiempo que tenemos y nunca pensamos en que puede acabar antes de que no demos cuenta.
Oh, the feels! I wasn't expecting the story going that way, I was giggling at the mall background "idk cute toys maybe," and then you hit me with that?!?! Literally crying rn. Still loved it though.
Love the use of colors in your game, they are so bright and blending well together. The characters looks very unique and you did a lot of CG in such a short time.
BUT it's so sad why are you doing this T_T. The contrast between the color and the sinking feeling of something being wrong did me number here.
That was beautiful, both the storytelling and the art. Nicely done.
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I love the art style and how the game uses colors. The visual is warm and lovely, it gives me Our Life: Beginnings and Always vibes but with the game's own style and different feel at the end.
I like how the game's narrative makes me emotional according to the plot, especially at the ending.
Also great use of Renpy 8 new speech bubble feature, it makes the dialogue easier to read and digest.
Wonderful job!!!
Thank you so much!
I've always loved the idea of speech bubble VNs so since it came out for Renpy 8, I've jumped to use it in my games!
this was beautiful
this was beautiful
Thank you so much!
oh my fucking god.
i'm literally. crying so hard.
this is such a good game and you tied the theme in SO WELL. even knowing there was a plot twist from the other comments, i didn't predict what would actually happen. SO GOOD and the art is BEAUTIFUL!!!! love the camera work and text bubbles. amazingly put together game!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much!
I'm glad it works with the theme! I was a little afraid it wouldn't be... unreliable enough? So I'm glad it worked out well and that it was enjoyable!
The story for this was simple but beautifully executed. The ending made me emotional and I enjoyed the character dynamics between the two a lot!
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this game! ^^
ah man i wanted to rate this `the highest but i have to submit my my own entry:( anyways pumpkin spike you made a awesome game
That's alright, I'm very happy for the thought! ^^
That line about the toilet paper is going to live rent-free in my head for at least a week
Hahaha!
Apparently it was on mine too because some friends said I said that joke a while back...
Thank you for playing! ^^
oh my goodness that was so sad. BUT IT WAS SO AWESOME !! GOOD JOB !! The art was so fun to look at !! :3
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed playing!
DA TWIST
<3 Thanks for hosting this jam that helped me come up with the idea! ^^
OOF THIS MADE ME EMOTIONAL
Thank you very much!