Sure no problem, looked through all of it now and fixed them.
Thanks a lot!
Currently, not, I did run out of time at the end. That form also has no alternative endings as well curretnly. But I do plan to addd them later.
Sorry, I don't really know what you mean by that? You refering to one of the games endings or a regular bad ending?
You mentioned that the game has 4 endings: bad, neutral, good, and true. I can't apparently get the bad ending with my saves, so if you have one, I'd appreciate it if you uploaded it.
Other misspellings. The various forms use the same text template? If not, wolf, manticore, salamander, cat, squirrel, and slime need to be fixed.
I disagree, considering the wolf form. Also cat and angel.
That one is used in quite some forms:
Is it deliberate not allow Nana to return as fallen kitsune?
What trial and error? How to use a cell phone?
The comma brigade:
Apparently Nana can't even see her angel form in the mirror, or this would not work like that.
No spaces.
I find that name strange. Never saw it spelled that way in English literature, but you can keep it, if you want. Some other ideas from ChatGPT:
Also you use chimerae instead of manticore in this area.
I wasn't sure before, but in the teleporter endings you spell "Lamias", they should not be capitalized.
When talking to Darania, a textbox with Melia appears that doesn't fit in the conversation flow.
Pretty sure the effect is 2500 SP.
So now doing the true ending and the name mismatches appear also here. Beware that Lufiillia is only mostly correct.
No space here.
From which skill does Aftershock come from?
I've got 690... New game+ necessary I suppose.
Since you missed some stuff, I'll repeat that here:
What skill is Aftershock coming from?
Did Nana keep her shapeshifting powers? Or remained she stuck as Ascended Kitsune/whatever form she had?
How did Nana get back to the lost continent?
7th Tail does not affect Rabbit's nor Xia's normal skills.
I noticed an inconsistency. You can have Serina state that 6 world fragments are all you can get, despite her claiming with just 5 world fragments that she does only know of 5 world fragments. And if you go for the good ending with 6 world fragments, she doesn't complain about Nana not using all 6. Also no one ever wonders, why there are 6 receptacles.
Also, do the scientists always hide there in all endings?
Moving into orphanages is a strange thing to do. Those are for children and the staff only, right?
Is it deliberate not allow Nana to return as fallen/ascended kitsune?
I didn't missed them, sorry, I just hadn't enough time to response to all of them in greater detail, so will do that now.
-"Pretty sure the effect is 2500 SP."
Looked it up, it only grants 2000 SP. But you may have some equipment on that increases SP gain which would affect the potions as well.
-"I noticed an inconsistency. You can have Serina state that 6 world fragments are all you can get, despite her claiming with just 5 world fragments that she does only know of 5 world fragments. And if you go for the good ending with 6 world fragments, she doesn't complain about Nana not using all 6. Also no one ever wonders, why there are 6 receptacles."
Will fix that, thanks for noticing!
-"Didn't know that this is her name. Or this. Check all her textboxes."
That bug should already have gotten fixed with version 1.0.1
-"How did Nana get back to the lost continent?"
After it was returned the continent could be easily accessed by boat and planes for example.
"Did Nana keep her shapeshifting powers? Or remained she stuck as Ascended Kitsune/whatever form she had?"
Depends on the ending, she only loses those powers in the neutral ending.
-"From which skill does Aftershock come from?"
Depending on party members and difficulty, you get various extra buffs for that fight.
-"I've got 690... New game+ necessary I suppose."
Nope, you can get somewhere between 725 to 750 without ng+ currently. But it is hard to do since some repuation is tied to secret interaction or events. I do plan to add some more obtainable repuation in follwing updates.
-"Moving into orphanages is a strange thing to do. Those are for children and the staff only, right?"
Moving to the orphanage as new staff of course. Which ending did that belong to, will adjust the text to make it more clear.
-"Is it deliberate not allow Nana to return as fallen/ascended kitsune?"
For bad endings? No, I just was running out of time, so I cut them. Will be added later once I come up with them.
-"7th Tail does not affect Rabbit's nor Xia's normal skills."
Good to know, will look it up later and fix it
In regards of the orphanage, there is one such ending for the arachnae form. But there is another one close to it, but can't remember anything aside that I played it after the arachnae form and I played it in order. Can't you text search for "orphanage"?
