You seem to have a gift for story telling. I like how you added the spiders and foreground to fill the space out around the room.
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Unique take on the SHMUP! I find myself going around trying to shoot all of the NPCS.. Maybe its the gray hair, but I get a Florida nursing home vibe which adds layers of metaphorical complexities beyond my comprehension. The amount of work that went into the music paid off because now it is stuck in my head. I like the consistent theme in your work.
Visuals: Animation was a nice touch. I appreciated the monochromatic and use of patterns. Very clean and easy to read and understand where to go.
Storytelling: Entertaining concept. Is a tomato a fruit or vegetable. A lot of great individual dialogue
I struggled a little with knowing what I was supposed to do. I kept expecting to pick up an item.. But that was probably me just imprinting my own expectations.