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I like the theme of the sandstorm erasing.  The look to the game is cool and engaging.  The sandstorm has outrun me each time, so I do not get far.  

I was not entirely sure how to play the game, it would benefit from more written instructions, but I really enjoy the design theme once in the game.  It is definitely intriguing.  I would love to see what this game could become.  

Very well polished looking game.  I did not get the good ending, but I liked the blend of genres, it was exciting and unexpected.  

Solid game and message.  I enjoyed erasing the screen as a part of revelation in the story.  The story developed as it was played.  Interesting concept, good clear narration.

Solid game and message.  I enjoyed erasing the screen as a part of revelation in the story.  The story developed as it was played.  Interesting concept, good clear narration.

Definitely challenging to try and get the crabs into the basket and keep the craps moving when setting up walls.  I like the turn in the story figuring out why we were trapping them was fun.  I like the idea of erasing the sandcastle to build the walls.  

Short and sweet game.  Love the visuals and music choice.  I believe one can fall for a while off the map, and one of the memories was harder to get. Otherwise, great start to a game, the final screen I liked the color change and visual effect on the ghost. 

Interesting to play and see what actually had to get cut to get the game finished in the hours that were available.  Fun concept to see the finished product at the end.  

I like the variety in the representation of erasing, such as cleaning laundry and getting rid of dirty laundry.  Very pleasant game to play.  Wish it was longer as well as the music.  Overall great design choices. 

Great representation of theme, game is a bit challenging.  Overall nice design.  Might be nice to have more music.

Great representation of theme, game is a bit challenging.  Overall nice design.  Might be nice to have more music.

Music is really enjoyable.  It is fun to try and race against the clock.  I got just a bit motion sick, but nevertheless fun to play.  Some camera movement is not fully stable/smooth and a longer jump might be nice.  Overall, great visual design with the appearance of being drawn.  

Excellent representation of theme.  The world is very bright and engaging.  Using the eraser concept around the world to solve environmental puzzles is very creative.  I don't believe there was one, but it might be nice to have a pause menu.  Otherwise, the game for some reason reminded me of old Spyro games so it had a nice bit of nostalgia feel for me.  

Very fun game, I only made it so far, but I could tell with practice that I would be able to have better mastery of the controls.  The touch of orchestral theme at the start of the game gets you very excited to play.  Overall, very engaging sound design.  The erase effect on the player is great when they are hit by the beam, and the other variety of player animations such as being knocked off the screen are enjoyable and motivation to keep playing.  

Fun and engaging story.  Currently is unfinished which was expected as it is a demo.  The audio track really set the mood of the game.  I could see this developing into a story  with multiple different endings and building of relationships.   I like the option to save, reload, restart, and adjust the theme at the top of the screen, that is a very helpful detail.