Wow, this was so, so beautiful. I adore how much effort you put not only into the music, but the lore of the game itself. Definitely has to be some kind of open world big boss kind of game in the style of Elden Ring or Shadow of the Colossus. The concept art with the music, especially the use of guitar reminds me of a bit of southern gothic/weird west, but that just might be me.
I think the songs can get a little too wall of sound-y at times, I heard it the most with the last track, might be the effects or something else in the mix or both. Still, it did not kill my enjoyment of the composition at all, and it definitely enhanced it in some places.
This is like a beautiful mix of hyper light drifter, dark souls and a bit of hunt: showdown, and i am all for it.
Don't really have a lot of good criticism to give cause this is just super good! I'm not really experienced with chiptune myself but I think you pulled it off pretty flawlessly, and the decision to do something more orchestral as well must've been tough, but it definitely paid off! Really great stuff overall
I love how consistent everything feels, instrumentally and in tone while also still capturing different emotions really well. Each track reflects what you're going for really well too. The leitmotif throughout is super cool as well!
I'll have to check out the Wonder Egg Priority soundtrack at some point (and the anime too, that one has been on the backburner for a while lol)
And yeah mixing is one of my weaker points, so I plan on improving that. I knew that clave was way too loud but the time I realized it it was too late haha
Thanks for the feedback and criticism! This is the first time I've been through the process of making an OST, but I really enjoyed it and it might be a career path I might possibly head down. So I really appreciate your thoughts and take them into consideration for my next project. Even if what you said are more down in the details, the slightest change can make a big difference. Again, thanks for giving great constructive criticism!
This told a great story overall! I think the tracks flow super well together and all are cohesive both musically and aesthetically. Could do with some variation in the tracks to spice it up, but you clearly have a great ear for composition!
Honestly I didn't expect these many ratings since this is my first jam, so the feedback I've gotten has been more then enough haha But thank you, I appreciate your thoughts! Your submission was great as well!
Loved this submission, gave me heavy Toby Fox vibes in the best way possible. My favorite was definitely Soaring in Ambition, but FEARMONGER was awesome as well with how it picked up and had some rock elements to it. Great collection of tracks overall!
Love the sense of adventure and hopeful sound of the music! Reminds me of stuff like Chrono Trigger or Final Fantasy. I would've loved to hear about your game concept and what lead you to choose this style of music though!
Honestly, even though the mix would definitely improve it at least a little, the beautiful composition pushes this track to a whole other level! I was super inspired by Ghibli making my submission, but I think yours really takes that feeling and encapsulates it. Also love the thoughtfulness you put into the concept of the game itself. Really great stuff!
I really appreciate the feedback! Mixing is one of my weaker points so that's definitely something I'll keep that in mind! And definitely my sound selection is something im super proud of
Wow, this is like basically perfect for me. I'm a sucker for interactive music and the concept of opposing worlds, so this hooked me in immediately. But your sense for composition and sound choices is exquisite. The way you described your game linked with the tracks perfectly, it really made me want to actually play this fictional game of yours. My only real problem is that there isn't a game to go with this, amazing work!
This is a really solid collection of tracks that keep a consistent theme while also talking different emotions within the music. There's a lot of interesting composition choices that I think panned out really well, especially within the string section. Great stuff overall!
A great collection of songs, all very pretty and matching the aquatic feeling of the picture. The instrumentation and composition matched perfectly, and overall was very beautiful!
This is absolutely fantastic, definitely sounds like an area theme to some kind of platformer. It's the kind of song where I could get lost in it for hours while playing a game and never get bored of it. Fantastic work, great instrumentation and composition all around.
