I like the melodic ideas going on here, and the doowop progression is always a solid base to work from. As mentioned, some mixing would enhance the experience - the piano, especially, takes up a lot of space for such a simple line, and backing it off some would offer the lead voice(s) a little more room.

I'd also like to hear some elaboration on the drum part - nothing too busy, but some variation as the melody builds could help strengthen the overall sense of progression within the framework of the 4-chord loop.

Some cool ideas here. Keep it up!

It's a nice little bop you've made for sure.

I think like others mentioned, there's not much in the way of mixing, where the synths sound kind of muddy/muted. It's also fairly MIDI in its sound, where it has that mechanical MIDI choppiness, which can be appropriate in some genres.

Great work though!

Good track man! I think it needs a bit movement & "unpredictability", felt it was kinda linear at a point, I mean the artwork does give nature a lot of emphasis it would be great to have that transposed in the song.

Spite what I said before, composition is till good in my opinion, the mixing could use some work, it sounds to artificial, unless that was what you were going for.

Take care :)

I liked that lead synth but I don't know why it sounds a bit "muddy" in its melody, be careful when making fast rhythmic figures. Good job!

Interested in the muted tracks here. But there seems to be no mixing, just the raw VSTs, which is fine for a simple track like this, but I think overall hurts your ratings in the jam. But this is a good submission, nice work.

I really like the chord progression used here, as well as the piano arpeggios. really has a cool vibe.