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A jam submission

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A grimdark future story for OPR Writing Jam #10
Submitted by SynthPunk93 — 20 hours, 49 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concepts & Originality#54.0404.120
Overall#223.5823.653
Flow & Clarity#243.5693.640
Adherence to Theme#433.1383.200

Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

Superb imagery and development of characters in such a short space. Really enjoyed reading this!

Submitted

great story!

Submitted(+1)

*chefs kiss*

Submitted(+1)

This was a good story that really helps with flavor world-building as a whole (not just being bias as it meshes with mine by happenstance)

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This was a very enjoyable story, and a very unique take on the DAOU. The glimpse you gave us into their culture is exactly what I look for in a jam submission - good job!

Submitted(+1)

Nice one.

Submitted(+1)

Excellent.