Excellent.
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Truth on the Horizon's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Concepts & Originality | #9 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Overall | #9 | 3.846 | 3.846 |
Flow & Clarity | #13 | 3.846 | 3.846 |
Adherence to Theme | #15 | 3.692 | 3.692 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Immediately felt myself pulled in to the story, with fantastic concepts through out
A man with such will that he refused to be spaghettified by a black hole. 5/5
Love your flow, very comfortable and readable! I always love to find shorts that immerse you in the eatheral-ness of psychic science!
Love your flow, very comfortable and readable! I always love to find shorts that immerse you in the eatheral-ness of psychic science!
I absolutely loved this story. I was totally drawn in after the first paragraph! Crystal clear adherence to the theme on multiple levels, great job!
Really liked the cybernetic twists and the psychic mantra elements! It fits well into the theme. Could use a bit more originality in the concept though, feels a bit familiar. Great pacing!
Some of it was a bit gard to follow but my favorite story thus far. The space-time theme was great.
nice, what came to mind was the old inquisitor 54mm model for the lead character (if intentional it was a great callback)
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