Good stuff, appreciated the sense of urgency.

The flow of the writing is really rough. The constant short sentences and repetitiveness of "noun did verb" lines was really distracting. The theme also felt like it could've been more clever. But the setting and the battle itself were fun. The flow may have been rough but the overall pacing was fine and it wasn't actually a hard read!

Nice write-up and take on marauders that I haven't read before on these jams!