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A jam submission

HangryView project page

submission for OPR Writing Jam
Submitted by atlasA-M — 1 hour, 22 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concept & Originality#54.4094.409
Flow & Clarity#123.8183.818
Overall#123.9093.909
Adherence to the Theme#213.5003.500

Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

Severely underrated by people without a sense of humour. This was brilliant, the words flowed from the screen right into my brain and made me laugh out loud. Original, bold and still 100% on theme.

Submitted

I loved this look into how one might write a really grimdark halfling culture! The idea of the stout six-meals-a-day halflings as a kind of sentient locust swarm is genuinely horrifying, although you handled it here with a wry, deft humour that was awfully delightful to read.

Submitted

Really liked the flow of this one!  The second paragraph (and onward) turning on its head the normally relatable trope of the hungry halfling into a greedy monster was great.  

Submitted

there's about to be a riot, mark my words...

Submitted

Loved this concept, characters, and straightforward story beat. Well executed - kind of flat, but it's worth it for an elegant little joke like this.

Submitted

Ah, yes do not read if you have not had breakfast yet! Nice twist on a classic trope.

Submitted

I read through this twice, and I think it deserves it. The balance of tone is maintained very well and in a way I didn't expect.