Loved it! Agreeing with other comments that it could've used space to breathe in parts, but that's absolutely a limit of needing to be one page. Otherwise, I enjoyed the characters and bits of humor.
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My submission for the the OnePageRules Writing Jam #8!
An Eternal Dynasty ninja works alongside an unconventional partner in the form of an orc commando.
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