Bubble is a cool bit of a beat mixed with cute instruments? It's interesting.... and it's beautiful)

Wurster song is just a good one

As I see it, you were trying to achieve a "childish" atmosphere with the selection of tools. You did it!

I liked it)

Just a heads up, the YouTube video has a lot of clicking in the audio that takes away from the music. I downloaded the music and the quality was much better.

I like the submission overall, but it tends to meander a little bit. The ideas there are good though, and I think adding some percussion would go a long way in this regard. Good job on this soundtrack.

it was nice had a nice somber feel to it at most times

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As there is no accompanying text, I will comment on the music only but zi would remark that having a game to go along with the music would have made it easier to understand your artistic choices - it can be important to keep the "client" in mind.

I sadly think the Submission has some issues. Others have commented on the muddled rhythms of the second track already, but I also feel you hurt yourself by trying to be a bit too "cute" with the instrumentation. I can hear what melodic and harmonic (and even rhythmic) motions you're going for in that track, but the instrumentation is so fuzzy, soft and has issues with volume leveling that what could be there does not shine. It shows that in your first track, which has a clearer and more purposeful instrumentation, we can follow the chords and melodies just fine and it does translate to a pleasant song. I see potential here if you keep these things in mind, and I do get the struggle - as composers we work on tracks so long that they become second nature to us and sometimes we become deaf to what is odd about them. Keep at it, as I like some of the bubbly cute qualities you got here. 

the second track was really hard to follow sometimes. Also idk if it was just me but I was getting some really bad clicking noises during both songs.

I liked the first track and I think an easy way to make it sound better would be to have the percussion come from both sides to take more space in the song without being too loud.

Very interesting interpretation of the theme! Was nice to listen to as you have some pretty cute and easy going musical ideas that I liked a lot. As a note of constructive criticism, make sure that you include something consistent for the listener to follow along to! The overall rhythm in your second song is a little bit muddled, and part of what will help that is if you give a consistent beat for us to follow, as it will help make your already cool ideas a lot more focused to the listener, and make it even more compelling!

Very fitting for an aquatic/ bubbly world. I especially enjoyed the first track :)