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jlass - Traverse - The Fractures of Reality's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Correlation to theme | #467 | 3.082 | 3.167 |
| Creativity | #519 | 3.028 | 3.111 |
| Overall | #560 | 2.823 | 2.900 |
| Composition | #564 | 2.704 | 2.778 |
| Quality | #569 | 2.758 | 2.833 |
| Impression | #601 | 2.541 | 2.611 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
jazz/classical (I have attached a pdf file compiling all the information on the game I imagined to which I have composed the music to...
Message from the artist
I just hope the track portrays correctly what I am trying to express.
It is background music for when traveling from placee to place...
Theme
How does it fit the theme?
It is my own take on the expressed theme, but trying to not deviate to far away from it, for it to not become too abstract, and the music, is very dissonant and with complex harmony, to represent the fractured parts of the occurrences in the world of the main protagonist (it is explained in the pdf, the concept and such)
Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://youtu.be/RHiJTqtYN0Y?si=gRxwl_QQu7jOIrty
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Comments
Really interesting harmonically speaking! My only criticism is that for an ambient piece the dissonances caught my attention a bit too much - but if that was intended, cool! Nicely done!
I think you have some good ideas, my only point of critique is that I think your track is maybe just a little too busy, so maybe adjusting the volumes or velocity's of a few different instruments can greatly improve your song. Otherwise good work!
The YouTube version is only for the purpose of demonstrating that It's an original track, listen to the wav, that is the mastered version! :D
Very beautiful ambient! I liked the notes of mystery and.... hey, it's a beautiful shaker!
Well done job on the composition. Thank you!!!
Quite a dark song, but I could see it in a game. Pretty creative. Good job!
I think the song was really quiet so increasing the volume would help a lot.
I liked the shaker percussion you used it felt very real with its changing intensity.
I like the dreamy and noir environment created by your piece. The dissonance really helps your piece do that work, and the long buildup plus the repetitiveness really highlights that. Overall a really good entry !
I would really appreciate if you could rate my entry too !
Thanks !
A nice track, I think it fits with the scenario explained in your PDF.
Nice! Very moody and a bit dark. It somehow reminds me of some of the tracks from Boktai.