That arp synth thing in fondo was really pretty! I hope you return to these songs in the future and expand on them, because what you have right now is really great!
I think you have some good ideas, my only point of critique is that I think your track is maybe just a little too busy, so maybe adjusting the volumes or velocity's of a few different instruments can greatly improve your song. Otherwise good work!
I loved the chill ambient vibes of this track! My only critique or point of advice might be to change the chord progression up a little bit so the track can feel like it flows and there can be some variation, rather than the progression throughout the whole piece. You did awesome with this song though, keep up the great work!
Your three tracks are all so different from each other in terms of setting the mood, but then listening to all three in a row you can still tell they're all from the same project! You did really great with each of these tracks, awesome composition!
WOW this was really pretty music, you did awesome with this submission! Whatever synth or noise you used at the beginning of Arise really tickled my brain but like in a good way.
The ending sequence was really well composed! I could totally picture that song at the end of the hero's journey, watching the sun set after a hard battle!
Your work is really experimental! I love the use of real percussion sounds like the tapping in Main Menu. I really want to know your inspiration and the meaning behind these songs, especially with Leaving Home being such a dark track!
