This reminds me of yume nikki and I love stuff like that. gj :D

Great choice to use dreams as a setting - whole tone has often been used to simulate a weightless feeling, and you captured that really well, especially in Dream Walking. 
The two pieces didn't feel all that connected to me, like quite different games; they might have made sense in a larger OST, but as two tracks they felt a little disparate.
Don't get me wrong, I really enjoyed both pieces, just talking about the overall theme/intention of the 2 tracks :) 

this is great!

Dreamwalking has some nice chord progressions between the chorus and bass and the mallet melody is lovely. Really cool percussion rhythm in Dreamer's Battle and a cool call and response motiff. Very cool entry.

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I love that the main instruments in these two tracks are bells) The small strings complement the slight mysteriousness of the theme perfectly! (And it also feels a bit Asian, heh).

I like it!

I liked how dreamy the first track was, and the bells were a nice touch!

Second track had a more spooky sound to it which I liked, I'm guessing you went for the whole tone scale challenge with this one? 

Good job on both songs. I would be interested in how they would turn out if extended!

If I could suggest one thing it would be give the bells in the first track some reverb!