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Temple Hunters's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #8 | 3.733 | 3.733 |
| Engagement | #8 | 3.600 | 3.600 |
| Clarity | #10 | 3.467 | 3.467 |
| Unique Selling Point | #19 | 3.200 | 3.200 |
Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.
- Tweet is good and the game looks great! You've ticked the boxes for suggested content and you've published a great game! Tweet Suggestions: -- Need a Call to Action with Steam page link (your primary focus). -- You can embed the link to your Steam page in your Trailer using Twitter Ad Cards. Jump on our Discord to find out how. Press Kit: -- Great start. Flesh out some details and will be even better. -- Recent grads can add in things like your game dev degree, university, big companies you may have worked on games for, even as a student -- Redesign the front pages to match your own look and feel in the back. (The plain template is just for ease of sharing.) -- Price: Commas are European punctuation not English.. It's 10.99 not 10,99 -- Status: Early Access (Remove "In Development" as that implies it's not released)
- The pitch video is mostly driving instead of hunting but I do like it!
- Press Kit and Itch Page are well put together Really like the game idea and concept Tweet needs more word spacing Maybe less mentioning of puzzles unless puzzles are a core concept to the game - and if so - then i want to know more about that
- I doff my cap to you! I absolutely loved it- the Tomb Raider / Indiana Jones likeness is there but I still am along for the ride! I think the only question I have is will there be a story? Because I'd really enjoy that even more than I already do.
- Cut straight to the action in your trailer and break up your text with emojis and line breaks!
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/Niels_Dev/status/1451595624336527370
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/11fd-BMw30WPoqsk-OTpSXmDEg381_nQG-TGrvgT5F88/edit?usp=sharing
Itch.io Game URL (DevLog Update)
https://nielsdev.itch.io/temple-hunters
Linktree URL (DevLog Update)
https://linktr.ee/NielsDev
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From the tweet and pitch I can tell what to expect from the game, which I like. A lot of your trailer footage is similar to other stops so I think you could trim several scenes out without losing any part of your key message.
This looks fun! And the Tweet and press kit are well put together :) you should add a call to action in there. In your Press Kit, don't include sections that are not applicable (such as awards) - if it's not relevant, it doesn't need to be there :)
Tweet is good and the game looks great! You've ticked the boxes for suggested content and you've published a great game!
Tweet Suggestions:
-- Need a Call to Action with Steam page link (your primary focus).
-- You can embed the link to your Steam page in your Trailer using Twitter Ad Cards. Jump on our Discord to find out how.
Press Kit:
-- Great start. Flesh out some details and will be even better.
-- Recent grads can add in things like your game dev degree, university, big companies you may have worked on games for, even as a student
-- Redesign the front pages to match your own look and feel in the back. (The plain template is just for ease of sharing.)
-- Price: Commas are European punctuation not English.. It's 10.99 not 10,99
-- Status: Early Access (Remove "In Development" as that implies it's not released)
Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
Suggested Tweet Edit:
#TempleHunters: An Online Action-Adventure where 2 teams compete to claim the most treasure for their nation!
You and your team must raid tombs, solve puzzles & fight enemy players to claim victory and take home the gold!
Download on Steam
https://store.steampowered.com/app/1459250/Temple_Hunters/
#PitchYaPitch
Cool game idea, and I really like your trailer and all the different scenes/gameplay it has in it! The screenshots are also really nice too.
A couple notes:
- You might want to include a link to your steam page in your tweet so people know what platform it's for and where they can buy it
- Is the logo for your game any type of copyright infringement? I'm not a lawyer or anything but it might be something to think about if you haven't already
+ Whipped my hat off! And I really like it...
+ The music is triumphant and grand. Full of anticipation.
+ Top-down perspective makes for a nice change!
- Plot inclusion?
Really like the Indiana Jones vibe I get from your game
Cool music. I love that you show a lot of environments in the trailer and just driving along going on a big temple adventure!
I assume you posted the wrong tweet. But the game looks good 😁👍
I like the game and work, but there is no direct sell or call action feeling