Please see Teal's play-through video, as well as her review of the game in the video description:

Let's just get this out there right off the bat, I really don't like horror games, period. However, that doesn't mean I won't be able to make an objective judgement on horror games. We cool on that? Alright let's get into the review:

I like the inclusion of extra sound options like the mixer (Tony's Plugin?) Raising the low frequencies sounds cool with this edgy title screen music. I'm sure I'll regret raising the volume levels and low frequencies later on (probably jump scares incoming).

Obviously, if I walked into an amusement park and everything went dark and a dead body appeared on the floor... I would just leave.(And call for help) This game doesn't let me immediately leave the park at the beginning of the game. 0/10.(This is a joke, not your score lol)

I like that you gave two light sources to the player right of the bat. The circle radius light and the flashlight. Most of the time these games are too dark.

Good idea with applying a pixi filter to the screen when the player is actively being chased. It's a good que to the player that it's time to hide.

The menu has been simplified and I think it looks clean. The busts are cute and look good. Well done.

I appreciate that not everything is an instant death, like drinking the mysterious liquid. Instead you will suffer HP loss and depending on your current HP it may or may not be an instant game over. This is a much better way to make these horror style games and it still requires trial and error, but gives some room for learning and you end up wasting less time in the menus, saving and loading. Good stuff.

The maps are small and the tilesets used are really good, I'm sure it would be easier to find flaws if everything wasn't so dark, but at the same time I think you're providing enough light in the scenes most of the time. 

The blood fountain's collision is messed up , It lets you walk on top of it instead of behind it.

There are too many events that say "Nothing Interesting." This doesn't mean that there are not enough events, it just means that you're wasting everyone time. If there's nothing interesting then you don't need an event saying that there's nothing interesting. Just eliminate the extra show text padding by remove the event.

Legit got scared when being chased after finding the hall of mirror key, good timing on those chase events. Damn you!

The dragon map looks a little off, It's easy to fix by removing a few tiles. Also the lighting isn't set and I can tell this is where you ran out of time on the entry.

I felt like the ending was missing a scene or two. The last show text thing was just an odd place to roll the credits. Anyway, this was a decent and short horror RPG Maker game. Like I've stated earlier, it's not my type of game and I really didn't enjoy it, however I think it was decently made and with the exception of a few instances, I felt it had good pacing. Unfortunately most of these types of games are just backtracking over the same maps trying to find the switch to flip. Not fun gameplay to me, but there is an audience for this kind of stuff.

The story is dark and demented and I didn't really like it, but I'm just one person. I think you put together a good entry into the game jam so congratulations. I'm sure you've got 100 more demented stories to tell as I know you've already made a bunch of games, so I expect to see more from you in the future of course. 

Watched someone play this so I didn't play it myself but this looks really cool! Scary too!

I really liked the hiding in areas mechanic. And just by watching it, it really made me nervous! So the fact I wasn't in control and my heart still started racing is a good sign. This one is really well done. Good job! :D

This was a pretty good game, despite horror not being a genre I'm usually a massive fan of in RM.

I wasn't able to pick up many bugs, the most notable one in my memory being that when saying "no" to reading more manuscripts the book picture stayed behind, but that wasn't a massive deal.

How many endings are there? I got two of them.

I'm going to be perfectly honest: the story is more engaging before the "twist" at the end. The details given there just sort of jumped out of nowhere and didn't mean much given I wasn't that invested in the characters yet. The nature of the monsters was cool, though.

I also admit that the hiding mechanic got annoying after a while so I just edited my HP and SAN to 9999 so I would never die. :P

That is a really creepy game! LOL But I liked it. I admit to jumping a few times, especially with the music going. I also admit to getting lost xD I wasn't sure what to do after wandering the park and looking at everything. I went back into the house of fun and ran away from the horse a handful of times, but I couldn't figure out where to go or what needed to be done. But I do believe that is just me because it looks like others were able to get further. I will be playing again, I did enjoy it (even though I'm not a horror person lol ^.^) Loved the music, it really added to the atmosphere, the art was good too, very creepy! That horse is utterly terrifying. Great stuff! <3

I definitely found that the artwork and music was nice. The ending (not sure if there are multiple endings) was I guess okay.

Definitely found certain parts annoying, like the chase scenes didn't feel like a huge rush for me. The enemy disappeared by leaving the area then returning, so that felt a bit weird.

There were some passability and layering issues in the game as I demonstrated in my stream.

The dialogue was a bit odd at some points and the forced slowdowns were a bit annoying. 

Other issues I found:

It wasn't really intuitive where to go next except by blindly wandering around, one of the hiding spots ended up being destroyed even though there shouldn't have been an enemy there. Is there a hidden usage limit for hiding spots?

How did the main character already know about the mirror hall when there is nothing that seems to really point out the hall's name?

Why are they expecting the amusement park to work if it has been abandoned for years?

The mirror hall can end up with a hardlock (You can true hardlock yourself there and have to restart the game if you only use autosaves or save after hitting the lock, you can also semi-lock yourself). All purchases are basically useless except the chocolate bar. Buying other items can hardlock you. There is apparently a way around this if you know how or discover how, but this is not apparent in the game unless you happen to discover it. It is apparently supposed to be a puzzle, but lacks any real hints that it is supposed to be a puzzle.

Imagine I gave you:

Then told you: Solve the puzzle. You might ask: That is a puzzle? With what clues?

Now imagine, I don't even tell you it is a puzzle. You might think it is supposed to be a die face of 6. You might think it is just some random thing thrown out there.

Nothing there tells you that you are supposed to turn the Os into + and add a - to the middle column. That means the puzzle is bad because there isn't enough information. I'm partially guilty of this myself (giving extremely obscure clues and very minimal clues), but in my case, it is usually more on purpose because most people aren't supposed to pass (ie. An extreme secret that people aren't supposed to figure out, such as the fact that in a certain map, hitting the top sign, top sign, bottom sign, bottom sign, left sign, right sign, left sign, right sign and then some other actions unlocks the debug key).

Now, what we know from the game is that you can attack enemies to push them back. If you try this on the mirror hall enemies, it gets rid of them. You have vending machines that sell items to recover your health and sanity, which are used when you attack. What do you think the most visible solution is? It is definitely not to move step by step (considering there are forced chase events in the game before reaching the mirror hall).

Imagine with the earlier example if the entire time before that point, your goal was to prop up the image and drop a penny so that it would fall through the empty cells without touching the filled cells when looking at it from the side. You'd think that that image was the same, right? Same issue here. The rest of the game up to that point teaches you that the game expects certain actions, then that one room defies those rules without telling you.

You can use subtle hints to help push the player towards the solution, but not having any hint as to what to do is just not a good way to design a game because it will just unnecessarily frustrate players. Part of good game design is making it so that the solution can be figured out. Take a Kendama for example. You have a stick, a string, and a ball.  The stick has two cups and a long pointy area. The ball has a hole about the size of that long pointy area's base. Very simple, but it is very easy to figure out the intended goal. You want to put the ball on the stick. No instructions really needed, but the player still can easily understand the goal. Look at the early M**** games. Very simple, simple instructions, yet things are fairly intuitive from there. Look at the ghost enemies in Super M**** World. You start off facing them so they are hiding. Then, as soon as you turn around, they start following you. Turn to face them, they hide again. This makes their mechanic very obvious without any real explanation. That first ghost acts as a tutorial without you even realizing it is a tutorial.

Really high-quality stuff, at the moment I started the game I was already impressed. The menu looked great with the fuzzy animation, music and sound design was phenomenal and even language options.
Great drawn character sprites and busts, unique tilesets and mapping, dialogue is perfectly crafted, and (obviously not bias) a great genre to work on, being a story-horror game. By the time I went into the park and suddenly everything went horror-like, I was still amazed. Everything is definitely made with passion and love into it.

For my feedback, I feel like the noise that the horse-enemy played was kinda obnoxious every time I entered a new area, as it spooked me every time because I felt like there was a real horse behind me or something. Not like that's a bad thing but the first time experience is definitely out-of-this-world. I was also kinda lost after the chase started, but I loved the adrenaline sprinting around the map jamming to the chase music.

These are the type of horror games I look up to, although I'm quite disappointed that this will 100% beat my game, despite a month's effort. Oh well, amazing horror game 10/5. I will continue playing after I review more games, and maybe suggest more feedback cos I got nothing more!

I look forward to what you do in the future with this game and other projects. Keep on the awesome stuff! If you win first place, you definitely deserve it! As a big big big fan of horror-games!