I'm not usually a fan of ARPG games, but this one was a lot of fun. Using a controller felt intuitive and the movement was smooth. It was also very straightforward getting from point to point. I will say that it felt a bit too dark in most areas.

Suggestion: Lighten up the game. I actually found the controls pretty great.

I (=Luna) died on the first enemies xD I tried to hit the ESC button, so she could use the grapes/berries that was left behind by the enemy to restore HP, but apparently it doesn't work when there's enemies around?
Some of the enemies are also cut in half when idle.

I was hoping to make such ARPG games for myself but when I found this game, this is such a masterpiece. The control seems fine (I love spamming dodge everytime) and the story seems great when it's all about Sun and Moon. I wish to see another game like this :3

I enjoyed playing this game very much. :) I already see that bugs have been pointed out to you in the comments so I won't dwell on it.

The highlight of the game, for me, is the story: the two main characters are really well done, I was so intrigued at one point in the plot for their interactions. All other game elements such as music or game mechanics are fine, in view of the limited time I think you did a great job!

I must be dense but I have no idea where I'm supposed to go next. I think I'm supposed to go to a cave but there doesn't seem to be one in town and every time I try to leave I get a message telling me not to go too far. Seems like a pretty cool game so far, but really dark, as in hard to see. I felt like I was breaking into the library after hours, for instance. Love the music, and the graphics are very nice besides being too dark and all.

ANNOUNCEMENT: There is a bug in the second boss battle that could result in freezing the game. To avoid this, rush to the very top of the screen between each wave of enemies. There are 4 waves.

This game has an interesting topic. I really enjoyed the beautiful graphics and the creation of the 2 reincarnated characters of Luna and Sol. The very fun combat system and the bosses were short and sweet but to the point. I love the choice of music and the dialogue wasn't too much and quick to the action.  Nice job overall! 

All the positive and negative aspects of the game have already been described in detail before me, so I will only say from myself that I really liked your game. Very sincere, light (in terms of perception, atmosphere), and beautiful.

I would also like to note that I liked your characters created in the generator. As far as I have noticed, not everyone manages to create beautiful, organic characters, but you have more than succeeded!

Thank you for a great game, it will be one of the examples of what I (and other developers) need to strive for in terms of quality :)

Nice splash screen, and I tend to like voice acting in RPGs. Clicking off the screen during voice acted cutscene can cause the game to freeze and go to a blank screen. The character moves too fast. This is like the first game ever that I've decided to turn OFF auto-dash.

The maps are a little dark, it wouldn't hurt to brighten them up a bit, you can still portray 'night time' by adding a blue tint. Movies and games do it all the time and it can work quite well, much better than just making the game overly dark. That's more of thing reserved for horror games. 

It's not clear where you're supposed to go at the beginning, a little help from the game would be nice. Like for example a light in an area that the player should be heading to next. since the map is so dark. 

I like the shorthand menu, which leads into the traditional Scene_Menu screen.

I like the accidental teleportation thing, I used it in my MV title "The Legend of Driftwood" as well. Not sure if it's a trope or used in other games (I'm sure it's been used before) but I liked your execution of it.

Some of the dialog is boring to get through, but there are moments where the story is good.  Just a note with the whole "one was born from the light of the sun and one from the glow of the moon thing", the moon glows because the sun's light is reflecting off of it, as I'm sure you are aware, but it just kind of sounds ridiculous the way it's delivered. 

There's a lot of talking and dialog before you get to any action and that's an issue I have with this game. You need to show, not tell. Get straight to the action at the beginning of your game. Then you can deliver the dialog after you invest the impatient player.

The game does give plenty of money and potions are not expensive, so there's not a huge issue with a few wasted items, but I want to suggest a system that you could implement in the future. Look at how Secret of Mana and Secret of Evermore lets you use items in combat with a radial menu, that would fit nice in here.

There are too many animations on the screen at any one time during combat, and it's hard for they eye to track what it's supposed to be watching. The enemy gets completely drowned out and you can't even tell if it's dead yet so you just spam attack like crazy until everything stops.  The fire animation shouldn't play every time you hit something with your sword, that's overkill.  Also the enemy AI seems too basic and all the enemies are just thorny punching bags mostly. Try to make them feel different if you can.

The maps are pretty, but a little too dark at times.

I like the boss battles with this system, it kind of has a Crystalis vibe to it. (An NES classic Adventure Action RPG). One of my favorite games when I was a kid, so nice job bringing a hint of nostalgia.  Unfortunately one of the boss battles locked me in the game forever... I am forever trapped by Eridanus... no seriously... I'm forever trapped, there's a game breaking bug here. 

Nice job with the music and sound design, I really like your choices. This game has potential and I'm glad you submitted a project to the game jam. Well done! :) 

Hi, I played your game. 

The story is interesting! I assume it takes inspiration from the Chinese/Japanese folklore of the Star-Crossed Lovers? I like how the characters' dynamics change over the course of the story. 

The combat takes a while to get used to, but it was fun! Although, the enemy being stunlocked after a combo can be easily abused by the player by button mashing. Also, I don't know if this is a bug or if I missed something - when Luna's HP goes to 0, she can still walk around and grab items, but as the player I can't access the menu screen.

Overall a fun action RPG with a lighthearted story; all it needs is more polish. Thank you for the experience!

Definitely somewhat fun, I recognize some of these effects so I assume you used plugins for a lot of stuff.

Unsorted list of issues:

No way to return to default settings, this means you can't change the window screen color back to default because of how the plugin is set up.

The menu sound choice of not having a sound when opening it, but having a sound when closing is a bit weird. Might want to consider adjusting that.

The map is a bit annoying to get to, as are some of the other menu options. Might have been worth hotkeying the map.

The skill assignments are really weird since they give you controller prompts even on a keyboard. Keyboard controls are a bit awkward. Hard to attack, dodge, and use your skills. QWE would have been better as an option or what might have been better would be the ability to customize your controls.

For the UI, might want to consider adding a fade option.

When running, the default attacks show up behind you. One the of the weapons, the Astro Dagger, has no attack animation so you can't attack with it.

The boots of Magus have Lunge attached, but it isn't mentioned.

Some passability/layering issues such as in the tables/flowers in the library, the fish net and nearby object in the river area, the monument in the cave, and the chandelier shadows.

How is the old man able to just teleport between dimensions?

During one of the cutscenes, only some enemies show their nameplates, so it looks weird.

Mushroom sprites are messed up.

Items can disappear during cutscenes, maybe have an auto-pickup? Some later enemies seem to not drop gold and some of the earlier enemies seem to stop spawning.

You can't use a gauntlet with the spear, but you can use a gauntlet with every other non-Sol weapon?

The Major just goes poof when you fight Minor and only appears after the cutscene. Also, the bears don't aggro you immediately even though it would make sense to.

The tentacle monster looks a bit weird on the wood. Might have been better to have the fight on shallow water instead.

The volcano area is really dark for being a volcano full of glowing areas.

One of the maps looks really similar to another map, making it hard to recognize as a different map.

Enemies can spawn while in the menu.

The control guide disappears fairly quickly.

The spikeball is pretty OP to the point that Giga Shock isn't that useful because you have to sacrifice the HP regen for Giga Shock and the spikeball basically does about the same thing as Giga Shock except smaller range.

You can walk on the sky.

Enemies seem to only attack on four planes instead of 8, so you can easily dodge by staying diagonal.

Seems really weird to just randomly have a Japanese word.

In the post-game area, you are invisible.

I like the character designs and overall aesthetic of it, as well as the music, especially in the forest and in the final area. This game is pretty cute and reminds me of Secret of Mana in its gameplay design. However, I quickly found that it is very easy to annihilate all the enemies and bosses by setting Sol to aggro them while you mash attack at a diagonal angle; they can't do anything. Overall, this does have good potential to be expanded upon, but I do recommend improving the enemy AI. The sparks are there for something truly special.

The most accomplished game I've played so far since the submission deadline ended. Nice design and gameplay work, rich and varied environments, a nice sound ambiance and a rather interesting story, a game I'll keep aside to finish it until the end (I restrict myself to 20 minutes per game to be able to evaluate as much of them as possible).

On the negative side, I would say: some small collision bugs (for example, you go through a suspended net), not easy to play without controllers (but not impossible), and too dark light at the beginning of the game (it took me at least 10 minutes to find the cave, finally by chance).

But a nice achievement, congratulations.

I love how this game turned out! It could have been a tad longer, but it shows we put our hearts into making it! I wish we could have fixed EVERY bug, but it's better to get something out than to miss the deadline.