Hey don't be discouraged by your results it's mainly because you didn't hit the 20 ratings. Your game game looks fantastic and the effort you put into the menu and little details is amazing and I really like it. Although it didn't quite feel immersive audio plays a huge role and there seems to be a huge gap between story and gameplay. Keep it up implementing the theme through story is never the best idea but I get why you went with it!
Can I ask you how you made this awesome looking menu?