I really liked the melody from the beginning and there were a lot of interesting ideas later in the track. As Kagegona mentioned, evolving the melody at the chorus would have been awesome and really feel like the song levelled up. Get everything in the right spot and it'll be an amazing track.
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You had very interesting ideas and trying to add stuff together that I would normally not even think of. With more work, I think these tracks have a lot of potential. If I had to point out something specific, I think looking into rhythm would help make tracks like Breaking The Wall be more catchy (if thats what you want of course). Either way it was good effort and overall solid set of songs.
It's so well-made. I can totally imagine an entire game composed and orchestrated by you. The cover art is amazing and props to your artist Asahi Yonaha. Childhood Once More was stunningly beautiful and was definitely my favorite. It hooked me in and made me feel nostalgic. The track has so much heart and was amazing.
These types of OSTs tend to be my favorite and I can say you're definitely one of the top for me! Incredible work :D
So much heart, that is how I felt listening to Stuck In Time. I really love how it progresses with all the elements that get introduced. The guitar was an amazing addition and brings it to another level for me.
I honestly did not realize The Earth Can't Hold Me was 8 minutes, it managed to keep me interested despite its long runtime. It always felt like it was going somewhere and kept my attention. Definitely more ambient than Stuck In Time and was good.
I think you did an awesome job if I actually wanted there to be more tracks in the playlist, so I'm excited to hear more from you in then future.
HEY COMET! This soundtrack is so cohesive and big. It really does feel like it would come from a game. You were able to showcase many different ideas and scenarios through the soundtrack. Your sound selection is great and you even mixed some sounds that I did not expect. My favorite tracks are Hotelier, Reef, Truth of Xara, and The Director
Amazing work and so impressive to have 14 tracks!
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. I definitely love the main menu theme the most because of the addition of water and bubbles. It played so well with how dynamic your sounds were later on in the track. IT ALSO REMINDS ME SO MUCH OF OCTOPATH especially when it starts to build up. My second favorite would be the Credits because I just love the melody. Amazing quality and work throughout. You mentioned it being rushed towards the end but from my perspective, the quality was still maintained until the end.
I definitely want to listen more of all of your works!
I'm very glad that it was able to be consistent throughout the OST and the first track was definitely was a worked on the most. Yeah the theme in itself felt very introspective which made me feel nostalgic. It's also generally the music I listen to so I gravitated to that feel easily. Thank you so much for listening :DDD
I REALLY LOVE THIS! Dynamic instruments and sounds which lends a lot to the quality of the soundtrack itself. Origins was my favorite soundtrack it felt like home. It was pleasant, cohesive, and well-made. The only thing I would want more is some sort of really recognizable melody or motif I can come back to and really feel that the tracks are related to one another.
Definitely one of my favorites!
Hey Bonsix! You definitely nailed a thriller/horror vibe for your OST. The tracks are very cohesive and is dark which goes along with your concept. My favorite song here is Viral Reality. It felt like a nice introduction to the track and the game concept. Your stage music definitely pushes the feeling of being chased. I think if the sections within those songs were more different, it would contrast well and keep me hooked.
Spooky work and love the concept!
Hey Nan! It felt like riding a rollercoaster going through your songs (in a good way) since you decided to mix a lot of different genres all together. I think its creative and definitely unique. My favorite track was "keep going." because out of all the songs this one I felt was able to mix sounds in a way that felt complementary to each other. It also felt like it came from a game. At least in my opinion, I find it hard to imagine how the other songs would be used in a game.
Awesome effort and like I said I really liked "keep going." <3
“Crushed by everything around them, a student has fallen into depravity and self-loathing. They only have a year left before graduation comes. As a failing student with no future, they have resolved themselves to get better. Can you help them find what they have lost?”
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