ha! Mind-gremlins
Thank you for the critique Erik. You've given me a ton to improve upon and think about going forward. Much appreciated.
love the art
Very cool
I love the goth girls on the cover.
I like how you used the shadowdark map tools to flesh out the city districts.
The backgrounds are very very vibey and inspirational.
I LOVE The Silver Serpent.
The world needs more piggies. Gives all those Texans something to do.
I really love what you did with the blurred back cover and putting the inspiration there.
Whoa fire arms rules lets go.
The ipsum text feels like esoteric latin I love it.
no problem man
I like how you designed a dungeon for any campagin. great work.
OH WOW A 3D HEX MAP! and the layout is fantastic!
I wondered if folks would catch the Beetles Joke XD
5/5 on usibility. I really love how you broke down the map and encounters.
WHOA the crystal oasis totaly reminded me of this cave in Mexico. https://cen.acs.org/physical-chemistry/geochemistry/Naicas-crystal-cave-captivat...
Whoa I really like the Egypt vibes. kinda makes me wanna watch murder on the Nile now.
Well if it's council certified it must be played. The council is the only trust worthy athourty these days I say.
No problem man, thanks for the fun read.
The perpetual darkness is VIBEY.
Characters must light torches when venturing out of the town hex.
Cool map. I like how you set up the factions.
I really like the quote from Edgar Til l inghast. It would make it super vibey if each page had a quote like this. :D
Is that Tarot art work?! The Art on those cards is cool.
very cool
Can I be friends with Mizmo?! Great entry.
It really is a great book!
I love the travel journal feel that the cover art work evokes!
I like to imagine that bob is just a happy little guy. he like long walks and eating ice cream in the park XD.
I really like the layout and the art work. the concept of using ACTS is quite insteresting an a forgein concept to me. Great work!
Thank you for the kind words.
I REALLY REALLY LIKE THE SILLOUTEE ART STYLE> especially that hag on page 2
Lot of effort in here great work! I think increasing the header size and having an editor to cut down on the wording would make it top teir.
no problem
Had to come by and rate my gurl megahs! I really like the steel flooring that you used for the header, and the seaweed for the footer.
