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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Vibes: Overall atmosphere and feel of the supplement. | #7 | 4.267 | 4.267 |
| Usability: Practicality and playability at the game table. | #14 | 3.867 | 3.867 |
| Overall | #16 | 3.900 | 3.900 |
| Inspiration: Effective use of assigned "Weird Tales" cover elements. | #43 | 3.567 | 3.567 |
Ranked from 30 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Color scheme and theme are a MOOD! Love the layout from top to bottom, and everything ties together so well. Spectacular work!
The look of this is absolutely wonderful. Especially love the flavor text at the bottom of some pages. Vibes are off the charts here.
Had to come by and rate my gurl megahs! I really like the steel flooring that you used for the header, and the seaweed for the footer.
IMMACULATE Vibes. From the first page, I was hooked. Short and evocative language throughout.
Very table-friendly layout and content. This may be my favorite read so far.
This was a super-cool adventure/setting. I had fun reading it, and I think I could run it fairly well.
My only complaint, one that I run into with a ton of dungeons, was that the map seemed so small, the rooms so close, that it felt like the events should bleed together, yet each feels distinct.
I suspect I'd be happier, if the map were just plain larger. I saw 30x12 tiles and thought 150x60 ft, but you reference the USS Johnston, which is apparently about 370x40 ft. To me, having longer, tighter, more claustrophobic passages would reinforce the feel of being inside a ship, where your current map is a bit boxy.
That's my only minor quibble, just a though in case you decide to revise it.
Overall, loved it.
Super impressed you were able to fit in an entire setting & ancestry along with the adventure in 8 pages or less. Very cool stuff!
This is intensely good and I especially love the whole harvest mechanism. (I’m doubly keen on the entry since I’ve also used that cover art for a game one time! http://seanfsmith.itch.io/puffin)
Clean layout! The subnautical modern shipwreck is an intriguing setting to discover!
Super clean layout and I love the use of color to denote parts of the adventures environment vs having to explain it everytime.
Also a modern romp underwater in Shadowdark. Drown’em all!
I could see this also as a great gauntlet adventure for level 0 characters!
Extremely good. Love the layout, it is very easy to read and easy to use. So much intrigue, the Factions, the history of the Vengeance, the quotes and all, arecompact and atmospheric. Easily one of my favourites for this jam.
Thank you 😊
I love the vibe of this, and i feel you did what i couldn't, and actually made good space in the adventure, for imporatant detailing and a coherent flow. Super Strong
Wow, this is fucking awesome. Easily one of my favorites; amazing unique ideas and themes, great writing and a crisp usable layout, this is fantastic and creative work.
Thank you :)
Half-Orca is good.
I'm very proud of it lol
I absolutely LOVE the biomechanics aspects of the adventure. Extremely creative use of the inspiration material.
Really cool adventure! I really liked the backgrounds and the formatting was super clean. Great job!
Great vibes, such a unique, weird concept. Clean design and great writing, and great use of environmental storytelling!
Great job on theme, even if it is a departure from typical fantasy tropes. Layout is 10/10. My only feedback is that the map feels- a little too 'modern' aesthetically for the shadow dark vibes?
Overall very solid.
I was trying to mix traditional fantasy with World War II and this is how it turned out haha.
Great work!!! An evocative mix of history, mythology and fantasy!
Thank you!
v.cool theme!
Very clean, great vibes!
Cleanliness is next to godliness, they say.