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Great entry! Should go without saying that it feels very polished, for a game jam game. Lots of juice and felt satisfying to play. 

I also liked the interpretation of the theme, I wished more entries took this approach. It felt quite chaotic come the end!

My gripes with the game do little to diminish the experience - the text was a little too small for me to read and it felt awkward having to pause to go between the book and the game. I think that's just the nature of having the game in 3D though - I imagine an overlay toggle key or whatever would have felt a little unnatural.

Great job overall!

One of the most impressive entries I've played so far! Great concept, well executed. It feels intuitive and polished. 

I'm struggling to find anything to critique; it's perhaps a little easy to balloon out of control in terms of economy but that does very little to diminish the experience. Great work! 

Very enjoyable submission! I like the name of the robot 😎

Well polished, very easy to pick up and play. 

My only complaint is that the fitting of the theme is a little tenuous. 

I like the idea! To improve, I think the controls could have been more intuitive and polished. It took a while for me to get used to resizing blocks with the right mouse button and it's not clear if I have a set of blocks selected or not - I think a few simple tweaks, such as highlighting them when selected, could have gone a long way here. 

Funny and clever interpretation of the jam's theme! Nice mix up in the last level. 

Overall a very solid entry. My only complaint mirrors a few other commentors in that it's a little difficult to understand what you have to do at first and the description doesn't do you any favours. Perhaps a tutorial level, or a better description (the goal is essentially to keep the white line within the green line using the space bar) would have helped.

I think the idea for this is really good! Simple yet effective. 

I would have liked the controls to not lock me in the four cardinal directions, it felt quite limiting and frustrating. 

I also think perhaps making the enemies gradually scale in size as you shoot them would work a lot better as well; it was quite difficult to tell what was going on at first. A solid first attempt nonetheless! 

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Argh, I'm kicking myself because this is something I could have easily added in five minutes with the tooltip system I made :( Ah well, thank you for your feedback! 

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