I like it so far. Art is good and the story so far didn't bore me.

I wish there was a cursor indicator or even a highlight to differentiate elements that are available to interact with, though it might not be viable depending on what the gameplay will look like.

My cousin has brought upon the wrath of the Gods and you end the demo so soon??

You use a bright blue text to show some names on a tan background. That's hard to read, I suggest a color change.

It might be nice to get the map earlier, I didn't understand I needed to leave my compound.

I don’t have anything very meaningful to say. I did feel a bit of disappointment when the demo ended – and like osur mentioned, that’s a good thing as far as the intrigue of your story is concerned.

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i've beaten the demo, and i was sad to see that it ended where it did. i call this a good sign, since i was invested in what you've had shown thus far. it's an interesting premise with a compelling story and nice art. my main and really only gripe was some of the font choices - teal (on mostly white background!!) is awful for a main character. otherwise i didn't notice any issues or errors. keep it up, i'll be sure to play again on your next submission.

I think it'd be nice to have everything that can be clicked on have a visual interaction, like the curtains of a building parting or a light from the entrance, that sort of thing. It's a bit hard to tell if you'll keep getting the same dialogue from clicking something otherwise or if it's a separate object, or if it's clickable at all (such as the weaver's house)