une super atmosphère, de beaux dessins.. j'ai tristement fait mourir un grand nombre de fois l’héroïne, une expérience sympa, jolie travail

liked the story telling, was a bit odd that you could just go to the end right away and get the same ending as you would if you go through and do everything. otherwise great job!

I loved the story in this one, and finding more out about it through the clues. The music is great and i personally absolutely love the art,  with the red and black fitting perfectly too. 

I'm not usually a fan of visual novels but i loved this one and had a great time playing it.

If you get the chance if love it if you could rate my game and give me some feedback :).

I was expecting there to be a path you can just take but did the game catch me off-guard. I love how you implemented the theme.  A proper visual novel vibe from this one! Great work.

Hey this game is really good! I found myself getting into the story every time I got a new clue. Most of the interactions you have don't feel useless and the progression is great. I think there's a certain number of tries you have have before you fail, but I was never sure what the losing condition was.

Really underrated game in this jam, a simple yet engaging story, good music and fantastic art!

The story really easily pulled you into the game at the beginning by making you wanna find the girl andI really loved the art style (the red color really contributed to creating the vibe). Well, nothing I can say more because of the visual novel genre (It's not like you have some mechanics to judge but the one thing you had to do (I mean creating a story) was done incredibly well. 

Even if I couldn't give you too much feedback because I am not a writer, I would really appreciate it if you would give feedback on my entry too.

I said this on the main game page, but I'll put it again here because I want to support this game!  It was short but pretty compelling.  The visual style perfectly suited the dark subject matter, and I enjoyed the replayability factor in that you could keep trying again to get different results.  Also, in a moment of random serendipity, I just so happened to come across this game today, which is the 10th anniversary of the funeral of my best friend, who committed suicide a decade ago.  Made me identify even more.  Good job dev.

visual novels aren't really my thing, but this was a well told and impactful story. great job

This one is really cool! I loved trying to figure out what to do while also unraveling the story of these characters' past.