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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Innovation | #3 | 4.405 | 4.405 |
| Audio | #7 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Overall | #11 | 4.006 | 4.006 |
| Theme | #13 | 4.165 | 4.165 |
| Game Design | #62 | 3.797 | 3.797 |
| Graphics | #63 | 4.013 | 4.013 |
| Fun | #74 | 3.658 | 3.658 |
Ranked from 79 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I couldn't get past the first stage. Nothing was happening when I brought the hole near it. But the graphics and audio are awesome! well done!
has you tried this version : https://lacrearthur.itch.io/plot-hole-fixed
The control is not very sensitive but it's a very creative game!
5/5 best idea implemented
Very well done. That was extremely creative. Probably one of the best one's I've played so far. With a little more refinement, I could see this working as a really fun interactive storybook.
My only real complaint is that the black hole isn't very responsive. I have to hold down on the words for a long time before they go away, especially near the beginning. If you get those kinks worked out, I think you have a real winner.
has you tried this version : https://lacrearthur.itch.io/plot-hole-fixed the black hole is more responsive
Oh I didn't see the lumberjack :/ at the end when the book comes back i deleted the 't and it restarted with overlapping sounds. Well maybe there are alternate endings? Anyways, great game, I was quite surprised of the narration in the beginning, a shame the texts are a bit buggy, other than that I loved it.
We have made a page with a fixed version if you were not able to enjoy it : https://lacrearthur.itch.io/plot-hole-fixed
I hope you guys take the 1st place. You really deserve it!
Thank you very much!
amazing!!!!!
ouuuuuuuh what a game !! Great work dude nice game ^^
btw i rated ur game can u rate mine pls ?? and thx anyway !! <3
On it :)
Your game looks amazing, but it won't let me go past the very first phrase (the fallen log). I've tried holding it for a few seconds, letting go and trying again like you suggested, for some reason it's not working... I will wait for an updated version to rate it since I wasn't able to play it, sorry :(
What browser did you use, what OS are you in, is it a decent computer ? Have you tried the windows version ? It is sad to read since it is working just fine on my browser :/
And you will not be able to rate it after the end of the week, but it is only then that we would be able to make updates to our games
I tried playing it online and when it didn't work I downloaded the game to my Aspire 5. However, I just tried again playing the web version and this time it worked! The black hole was still a little wonky, but I managed to play the entire game and rated it.
Overall, amazing work! Really cool idea for a premise and interpretation of the theme, nice narration and graphics! It was really enjoyable despite the bugs (there's another one at the end where you can restart the game before he finishes the narration, and then the two audios stay overlapped). Great work and I'm already following you to see your next creations
Sorry again for the inconveniences, the game was poorly optimized, and thank you very much for your tenacity to play it nonetheless !
Absolutely Gorgeous game on a high level. I loved it very much.
I want to know who's Aaron. Great game btw, a simple mechanic with flawless execution. Loved the narration, it was very entertaining.
Thank you so much for your feedback, and we are really happy you enjoyed it!!!
This game is so adorable and funny! I loved it!
Oh men, I loved it. I would definitely play sequels. I'ts just annoying how hard it is to go over some bugs.
We're currently optimizing it and making some changes - once the rating period is over we'll be able to update the game. Thanks for your comment.
Very enjoyable game! Loved the voice over and the story elements :)
The game was pretty funny, but the mechanic was rather poorly explained. I knew that the 'not' was out of place, but clicking on it didn't do anything. I also tried holding click over it. I thought I might need to suck it up with the hole, or maybe suck up the entire paragraph, but nothing happened. When something did happen, I didn't know what changed. A few plot holes later, I realised that you've got to click and shake, which is a rather involved action that definitely needs to be taught. Or at least that's what I thought it was, honestly still not 100% sure. I ended up at the enormous, observant eyes of the big bad wolf, but I'm pretty sure that was broken, no shaking text and the hole didn't do anything. The art was very cool and I like the random foreground objects that occasionally came up. Still enjoyed what I played, it could just use some polish round the edges.
Thanks for the feedback, we are working on fixing the bugs, we made some disclaimers to work around them on the game page, in case you didn't saw them : https://lacrearthur.itch.io/plot-hole
Nice art and sweet game =)
A really gorgeous game!
The Art, voice acting and the game in general was just amazing. 👍
Fun game! Nice narrative and art. Hope to see more details and options added in the future!
wow! i love the voice acting and the art is amazing.. congrats to the whole team for an awesome job and a 10/10 game!!