Play puzzle
The End Of The Narrator's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Fun | #117 | 3.440 | 3.440 |
| Audio | #155 | 3.280 | 3.280 |
| Theme | #178 | 3.160 | 3.160 |
| Overall | #205 | 3.133 | 3.133 |
| Innovation | #215 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Game Design | #260 | 3.080 | 3.080 |
| Graphics | #363 | 2.840 | 2.840 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
The narrator ends the game but it restarts slightly differently each time
Did you write all the code and made all the assets from scratch?
They are all our own and original assets except for the explosion sound effect
Leave a comment
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
Comments
I enjoyed the game. Narration was awesome and fun. It would be better if added a reset button to the room so that if the box is stuck in a wrong place, we can reset the room. Also adding some friction to the player and box would be better as its super slippery. Overall I loved playing the game.
I enjoyed the concept you went for and felt like you did a great job of injecting the humor in a way that didn't feel overly forced or out of place inside the game. Good narrative pacing between attempts, you can feel the narrator getting more and more annoyed.
Movement wise, I think it felt a little slippery and I had a hard time moving things around, especially at the beginning. I ended up shooting a box between levels multiple times, which was a little frustrating. However, once I got a handle on the movement and learned that jumping on top of the moving box stopped it, the game played a bit smoother and I felt like I was more in control. Overall, this was a fun submission and I had a good time playing and exploring the alternate "endings"
cool game i really liked the voice overs!!!
Very funny game with the narrator being pissed of by poor Harold lol.
As a constructive review... the R getting back to the beginning kind of annoy me. But as a short Jam game can be accepted
I laugh at the narrator's comments about Harold not doing what he suppose to do.
Nice work! Congrats!
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the feedback!
Fun little Stanley Parable-esque game, the narration and explosion sound were a little loud for me, otherwise nice job!
Haha we didnt realise how loud it was until we did the final test
loved the narration! it added quite the humanistic feel
Cute game and good take on the theme.
The voice acting and background music gave the game a very good and light-hearted mood.
Movement was a little slippery, especially when pushing the boxes. Frequently the boxes would slide all the way to a door and then there was no way to get on the other side of them to push them away from the wall (this ended multiple runs).
The initial 'The End' should maybe say 'The End...?' or something like that. It would have been pretty easy to stop the game right there. You do have a number of 'endings' and then the final roll credits.
You had two types of buttons, one that needed the box/player near it to hold active, and a switch that only needed to be touched once. For clarity, these could have been differentiated in artwork to show they had different behaviors.
Looks like you had a concept ready for breaking the 4th wall as well.
Very nice submission!
Thanks for the feedback next time we will try to make sure we do those things, glad you liked the game
Amazing game! I got big Stanley Parable vibes which I assum is what you were going for so good jobb!
I also loved to see a game jam gam with voice acting. I would have liked the movement to be a little less slippery, but other than that this was a perfect exprience!
Yep it was inspired by the stanley parable, glad you liked the game!
Cool game! Nice job.
Glad you liked it!
Very cool game bro .... 👌
I rate it :)
So I wish that you will rate my game
Here is my game - https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-9/rate/1933204
Glad you liked it! I did try to play yours but my computer had blocked it sorry :(
please rate my game bro
Very nice stanley parable styled game!!!!!!!!!! I had a lot of fun with the narrator. Movement was super floaty but clearly the whole concept was centered around the voice, so it wasn't a problem. Had to reset only once when a box got stuck against a wall, besides that it was a very smooth experiencie.
Congrats to the whole team!!!!!!
A very funny little game. Well done.
Thanks!
Brilliant job, I was laughing the whole time. This game deserves way more views!
Haha thanks so much!
haha this was a funny game! I enjoyed playing it through and hearing the voiceover! Well done!
Thanks!
Awesome tribute to the Stanley Parable! The humor is on point, the theme is wonderfully respected, I enjoyed finding the different exits ^^! The narrator is really awesome, I love the voice acting <3!
From a game design perspective, I would have enjoyed the two kinds of buttons (the one to press one time and the one to hold) to have different visuals (even a slight color change), it was a bit confusing. The explosion sound is WAAAAAAY too loud, headphone users warning ^^'.
Overall a very solid game =)!
Haha glad you had fun!
Found the safety nerd ending first :-) Like the simple old-school style! Would be good to get the sprite to flip left and right when you move.
ah sorry there was a bug it does if you use A and D to move but not when arrows keys are used
Loved the narrator thing! It reminds me of The Stanley Parable. And I liked the ending, it's pretty fun!
Thanks! glad you found it fun!
amazing, nothing wrong with it.
I enjoyed this game quite a bit, but I think there's definitely some room for improvement when it comes to the graphics and player sounds. Btw nice narrator dub i like it XD
Thanks glad you liked it! We did not have heaps of time to work on this project so some parts were rushed.
I'm glad to see Stanley's long-lost cousin is following the family tradition. Also the safety nerd ending lmao
Yep haha! we thought it would be funny to add in some humor