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A jam submission

The Adventures of FlatrickView game page

A line segment named Flatrick goes on an amazing journey into two dimensions.
Submitted by jennadamscodes — 6 minutes, 27 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Story#134.2214.221
Theme#174.4714.471
Fun#2743.2943.294
Aesthetics#2813.4563.456
Mechanics#4462.7942.794
Sound#7481.2501.250
Music#7571.2941.294

Ranked from 68 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How many people worked on this game total?
1

Did you use any existing assets? If so, list them below.
no

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Submitted

cool game, love the way you've gave personality to the 2d space, the little story of flatrick and how it become a polygon 😄. Is quite minimalistic and well made, the narrative and effects gave a lot of character to the result. I'm curious what the future holds for Flatrick, great job! 🙌

Submitted

Very nice, thanks for sharing.

Submitted

Nice story and mechanics around the progression. I think there's a concept here that you could expand on into a full game. Perhaps an evolution into 3D and even a realisation then that being in 3D isn't necessarily better :)

Submitted

Cool story and simple graphics, but some music and SFX are needed. But other than that pretty good game

Submitted

The game was really simple and funny! It was a sort of life in a dimension that had inside two other ones of it, that was fantastic! Was you inspire from Flatland? 

It would be nice if you want to carry on in the development, the story was good and now we’re curious to know the next pass ;D

Submitted

Good start to a game, looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

Submitted

I really enjoyed that, thank you for making it.

Submitted

Love the story, Flatric is my hero! So sad that the game ended so quickly.

Submitted (1 edit)

Nice little experience you've made. Great job! It's simple but I like your storytelling. I understand the time constraint, but it still ends too abruptly though. I wished it had a tiny bit more. Also, gamepad support almost works, it just needs a couple of buttons for advancing the story and jumping around. I'd love to see the follow-up to this. Oh, and music and sound effects will bring a lot of life to this.

Submitted

It was a bit of a strange mechanic for me, but you were able to tell the story excellently.

Submitted

That was simple but the most unique game a played in this jam.

Submitted

Lovely short story. Disappointed that it ended so quickly, but completely understand with the time limit! :) 

One thing that I did have an small issue with, was that in the first level you didn't have restrictions or any guide where to go. I ended up thinking that you should follow the line, and went FAAAAAR until I was like "I'm done, I'll just go up a bit and see if there's anything there" :D Thankfully there was, BUT then I had to go aaaaalllll the way back for the portal! :D 

Music and SFX would have made the game a lot better as well, at least some nice quiet background music would have fit it perfectly, to even more get the player into the story! :)

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the thoughtful feedback! Yeah, I think it's a little flawed in that section as far as missing guidance or anything interesting to interact with to get you to go far enough away from the line to trigger the next part. I have some ideas on how to improve that when I get back to working on this. :) I'm also probably going to change it so you can't go on forever.

Submitted

Heheh, I was legitimately disappointed when it ended so suddenly (a good sign - I was looking forward to more!). This one really embraced the theme harder than most, and had a compelling story! Great job!

Submitted

A short game with a lot of strength in its story. Its a shame there is not more of it but be proud of what you have created! In the words of my old professor, "Mathematical"

Submitted

What a great approach to the theme. I was hoping I'd see a game about evolving through the geometric dimensions and you definitely didn't disappoint. Though the experience was short, it felt very polished and appropriate for the story beats. I just wish I could see where you were planning to take it next. 

Submitted

Cute game, was hoping there was more, but I loved the writing!

Submitted

Cool game concept!  Sad to see it was so short, hopefully you add more to it in the future.  Good job!

Submitted

Nice submission! If you want to test our game there it is: https://astral-creation-studio.itch.io/your-princess-is-in-another-dimension

Submitted

Really fun game, loads of potential, I reckon it would be rallly cool if this game had narration like The Stanley Parable to really add some life! Great work!

Submitted

Its very original and i think it has future. The bad think is the small gameplay, but well done!

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