Great story. It had a sad-ish nostalgic effect on me leaving me feeling melancholy. It is was a good experience for me.

I really liked this story, it made me think a lot. I like how you described the city as a "heart with no pulse" and you set up a really good contrast between feeling suffocated in a city and longing to be somewhere remote and unknown. I also really liked the contrast between Cat's friends and the quiet mysteriousness of the horse. I thought the ending was really nice too (I mounted the horse) and it makes me wonder if there even was a horse, and if maybe you chose the name "Cat" because at first she felt like a domesticated animal in a big city but at the end ran off into the unknown as a wild horse would. I am very happy I played this :)

The writing is done super well and just works perfectly. I'm not sure if you're able to do this, but I think if you removed the undo button on the choices it might make them feel more impactful. For example, at the end of the game, when you have to either kill the horse or mount it, that felt like a really powerful choice that I had to make, until I realized I could just undo and see both endings. But overall, great job.

Writing was really good , loved the hint of ambient sounds.  They really added to the overall feel of the story.

Cool! Maybe you could make some better background ambience so it loops better, but apart from that I don't have any criticisms.

this was amazing! omg the writing is great! the sounds drew me into the story, the FX as well. the decisions all fantastic, this round was your round! i will riot if your not top 3  for this round lol 5 stars

Beautifully written. This was a thoroughly enjoyable experience.

I really appreciate you including the option to move back a step and select a different option. After I picked my final selection I just had to know what would have happened if I picked differently, and I was fully prepared to zoom through the story to do it again, but thank goodness you include a back option.

The sfx and ambient track are a really nice touch. They fit the aesthetic well and put me in the right mindset for the story. I want to continue and find out what happens next ... that's how I know it's a great story. Well done.

You have a really good writing style and I enjoyed reading through your story to the end. I can tell a lot of effort went into writing it and I liked how you can make different choices

I love the story! Always in depth story in your games so thats really good

You managed to capture the vibe perfectly, great usage of "art in the UI", all within the limits laid out by Xanderwood, smart! 

Story had some choices to follow, at the start, but kind off faded at the end. Great work on using Twine! And the ending seemed meaningful. How many endings do you have?

This…. was…. fantastic!!

Such an engaging story. I was on the edge of my seat. Incredibly well written.

I even like the ability to go back and explore different choices without having to restart the game.

The only thing I could change is that the background music (which is really good and engaging) doesn’t loop/transition well. There is a small moment where it stops and starts which breaks the flow slightly, but this is a tiny detail… Well done.