really nice, love the poam! ;)
love that you did someting story driven! :) (I would love to see more do that during jams! :))
but I think that some soundfx would be a really big improvement ;) (that would give the story significant more impact ;))
great entry :)

The presentation was wonderful, and the poem was very nice to read, I honestly don't enjoy walking simulators that much, but this was lovely

I always enjoy a story based game, and the art fits really well.

The only thing I can think off to improve is that I thought it was cutscene/dialogue at first and didn't understand that I can move. Maybe a WASD to move or something idk..

Well done!

I really liked the concept and the art. There are definitely things about your game that I feel can be elevated such has having music or even sound to accompany your writing. The black dot was cool, but I personally would of preferred a character of some sort to help immerse me more into the story. Definitely has the potential to be so much more!

Could not play the game. I guess you need to import the project in Godot, and run it from within the IDE. I really need an installer, an executable or a web version to play this. I'm sorry!