I'm glad to see someone actually utilizjng the landscape format! This feels old school through abd through . The six eyes really mix up the average core game activities and seems focused and fun. I'm always a bit hesitant towards too many stat vs ____ challenges, but I think it's hard to avoid dry mechanic speak as there's not really a formula in the knave corebook. (I use stat vs difficulty rating all over my own adventure.)

May I also clap increasingly faster to the naming conventions in this adventure? It feels extremely sword & sorcery/ Jason and the argonauts!

Excellent setting and artwork! Tons of interesting stuff packed into each point on the crawl. It's cool seeing mummies, I feel like I rarely see good rusty mummies.  I admit when I opened it I wanted to see that lovely beige color in the thumbnails as the PDF's background color. I think that adds to the art. Great work!

Nice work!  a very evocative location and some fun point-crawling. The eyes are really clever items and work well to keep Tor-Nagha present in the location. This one will be fun to run! :D

Art is incredible! It looks like there was some extra space where you could make all the art larger and featured more prominently. The eyes and other tables all have really interesting effects and each site had something unique to it

I feel like reading an adventure inspired by a medieval Lovecraft or some other kind of pulp fiction ☺️ Really great vibes 👍

I see someone else has done a swamp point crawl adventure. Well done. I really liked the simple traversal mechanic you had for crossing the landscape with or without a boat. And I like the idea of having a patron who is an ascendant godling. That seems like a fun roleplaying opportunity.