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A jam submission

For Clan and ForgeView project page

The Bloodhammer Star-Clan must defend their vein from marauding Aliens
Submitted by Bacongolem — 1 day, 22 hours before the deadline
Rated by 16 people so far
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Submitted(+1)

Nice entry, thank you for your work!

Submitted(+1)

Enjoyable read. Thanks for submitting!

(+1)

I really liked the story and the Dwarven ideology throughout. The literal use of "creative resources" twice was a bit heavy handed, though.

Submitted(+1)

Really good flow and an enjoyable read. Feels like it could have been a professional propaganda excerpt, and I mean that in the best way 

Submitted(+1)

Overall, an enjoyable read! Definitely written well grammatically and structurally; however, I feel like the exposition and “world-building” portions could’ve been interwoven differently to make it feel more like a part of the short story rather than trying to share external info to the reader. “Creative resources” came through well, though!

Submitted(+1)

Rock and Stone! Controlled cave ins are certainly one way to kill some bugs!

Submitted(+1)

Pretty good. Excellent use of the mining shafts. Also great for holding the tone all the way through.