That was a blast! Great story-telling and fun read

Really nicely done and can totally envision the P of P reference meets Moria 

Concepts & Originality 5/5

I'm pretty blown away by this. The story jumps right into the action, is gripping, and the premise is great. 

Flow & Clarity 5/5

I'm very impressed how clearly the narrative flows despite its backwards progression and frequent scene breaks. Also, the blow-by-blow combat is done very well, fast-paced and evocative. You done very good. There's some pretty minor grammatical/punctuation errors that need to be cleaned up, but I'm going to give a 5/5 anyways. 

Adherence to Theme 5/5

The story is focused around the theme and handles it in a very interesting way. Great.

If you want to discuss these comments/ratings, feel free to @ me in the OPR discord.

One of the highlights ofthe jam for me! The premise was fun (very 'Edge of Tomorrow') and I really liked how the scenes you showed seemed to move backwards through the battle: it felt very well-constructed.

Nice read. Particularly enjoyed how the lead character was confused throughout!

This was a fun read! Very Prince of Persia feeling, which was great. A couple of punctuation spots tripped me up while reading, so one or two more editing passes and this will be awesome!