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A Bound of Honor's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Originality | #17 | 3.211 | 3.211 |
| Adherence to the Theme | #18 | 2.895 | 2.895 |
| Enjoyment | #19 | 2.474 | 2.474 |
| Overall | #19 | 2.860 | 2.860 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Feels like there could have been more of a build up of tension, drama-wise, prior to the system messages, to sell the impending doom more.
I love letter feel of the log, I'd love for a log that said, "Escape shuttle launched"
Nice choice with the epistolary format for a titanic story
Overall, pretty good. A little hard to follow at some points, but it's an interesting exploration of the knights family. Also, his mentality.
First titan entry so stands well on its own. As for grammar the way it’s consistent in application, is it possible that this story was Google translated into a English from another language?
english is my second language
im quite good at it, i just self learn it wrongly in grammatic ways
Ok, with the consistency it looked more like the translate algorithm so well done.
Love the last stand angle, and that ending was, oof. Granted my only gripe is a bit of grammar.
I like what you were going for, and a heroic last stand is always a powerful and moving scene. At the same time, while the framework is solid, the writing needs to be polished for grammar in order for the story to land with the full power and impact it deserves.
Gives me 100% vibes of a weathered crusader sending a letter back to the mainland, which seems like the theme and vibe you were going for! I love it!