Shooting Star: I like the music box style – this works very well as an intro theme. The falling arpeggio is great musical imagery for shooting stars.

Starfall Main Theme: This is very creative to try and fuse two musical styles. These two genres are particularly difficult to combine so props to you!

Claire’s Theme: I got great images of a fancy woman in my head when listening to this theme – definitely fits your description of “refined”. The somber undertones of this track make me think that Claire maybe has some secret that makes her sad, but she doesn’t want other people to know about it.

Shane’s Theme: That kick sound is fat and big and awesome! This is a fun scrappy tune that makes Shane seem like a broody person who has been through a lot in his life. I think your choice of chiptune sounds for the lead works well to further distinguish the difference between him and Claire.

Battle Theme: Your use of the electric guitar makes this feel like a Pokemon battle with the driving drumbeat. It would be cool if you created another layer to this track that added a double-time beat or extra energy with cymbals or something for when the battle gets particularly heated. This really impressive for your first time composing for a competition. Doing more and more of these has helped a lot of us, who are also not professionally trained (some are), improve our compositional skills as well. Thank you for sharing your work!

You've got some really nice ideas.! Some clashing harmonies here and there but I enjoyed the choice of sounds and the overall vibe of the OST very much! My favorite one was "Shanes theme" I like the "techy" vibe which contrasted with the rest of the soundtrack. Nice job!

I love the story you wrote for the game and how well the tracks fit the story. The characters themes do a great job of telling us a bit about themselves. Nice work!

Shane's theme was an awesome surprise. I love how it contrasts Claire's theme and helps build your narrative about the conflict between the two. Nice job!

What a narrative! The story you told, both with words and with sound, was lovely. Good stuff!

I especially enjoyed listening to Shanes Theme -- I think the combination of the guitar + piano chords + beat really balanced well and showed personality! On a side note, I think the instruments' volumes can be more balanced in the Battle Theme. For example, I think the volume of the track with the motif from Claire's Theme can be lowered a bit to make room for Shane's Theme to shine.  Overall, good job and again, I enjoyed listening to your pieces and how it fit with the storyline you wrote!

That was a fun and coherent submission, with the way you build your tracks I honestly didn't expect something as Claire's theme! It was poetic and it's my favorite :) 

Claire Theme is very beatiful, I can fell some nostalgic vibe. Nice Work!  :D

Amazing vibe and aesthetic, the music box from the 1st track made me realize that it was going to be a great soundtrack! Nice!

Definitely nailed the star feel, descending scales indicating falling stars from above, very nice! I think your backdrop chord voicings might be more effective if you avoid repeating loops over and over again. You could try to break up your chords a bit using different inversions to add some more variety. neat job overall. I could see this in the game you describe!

This is a vibe, the music box in the first track is really relaxing

This was really fun submission! Great job coming up with a cool story and music to tell it with!