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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Creativity | #372 | 3.353 | 3.444 |
| Impression | #443 | 3.082 | 3.167 |
| Quality | #509 | 2.974 | 3.056 |
| Overall | #523 | 2.985 | 3.067 |
| Composition | #532 | 2.866 | 2.944 |
| Correlation to theme | #580 | 2.650 | 2.722 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
melodic hardcore
Message from the artist
hello : )
Theme
Inside my world
How does it fit the theme?
the musical and the poem im attached in the page
Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://soundcloud.com/axnipsjvhmm0/my_world
Number of tracks1
Genre
Rock/Metal
Soundtrack use permission
Yes (CC BY)
Any project
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Comments
The fact that you used actual guitar playing to make this is honestly really cool, and I love the rock aesthetic! I think I can agree with Lappytop when they said the song seemed a bit repetitive at times, but that's my only gripe with it and everything is pretty cool! Nicely done! A nice way to end this jam off since this will probably be my last rating.
That's all I have to say, have a great day and best of luck to the ratings! :D
It's awesome that you actually recorded this with a real guitar. Really cool poem too! My only gripe with it is that it felt a bit repetitive near the middle. But other than that great job!
This is nuts! Fantastic guitar playing and I‘m a big fan of your tone! Haven’t heard anything like this all jam and I’m in love!
Oh I'm very happy that you like it! I'm using Archetype Gojira X for the guitar tone (which they've just play for the opening of the Olympic game this year!). Thanks for your comment! ^_^
WOW... that's awesome, man! I honestly don't even know what I can say..... O, i know!
That's awesome!
I'm really happy that you think it's awesome! Thanks for your comment! ^_^
I liked the main repeating melody but I think specifically in the middle, the drums got to be kind of distracting. Probably because it sounds the same every time it was hit at the really fast part and it sticks out because of that.
Well I'm a rookie composer and I'm from a kinda metal scene so I maybe not really great at drum programming but I'll improve it . But hey at least it's in the middle and that's sounds alright for me. Thanks for your comment! ^_^
Finally some metal! Good job, love the ending specially, it's sounds so good, I wish you had just a bit more variety on the bass drum on that part, like different rythmic patterns, but otherwise super solid! Good job!
Well I wish i was having some cool bass drumming too, but I'm a rookie music composer right now so I'm gonna learn and try to experiment with it. Anyway thanks for your comment! ^_^
Love the unique sound! Feels very intense, like I'm confronting my inner demons. Did you record yourself playing the guitar? If so, it's really cool to see a submission here that features real instruments ;)
Yes, I'm using the real guitar and bass for this work! I'll try to upload my instrument later. And thanks for your comment! ^_^
P.S. I'm using programmed drum because i can't afford the real drum. TwT
I definitely wasn't expecting to see any a song with so much emphasis on the rock/metal genre as this song does for this theme but it's nice!
Well I'm in a hardcore band, and I think I'm good at making rock/metal music the most. So thanks for your appreciation! ^_^
My Dream is My world is beautiful
Yeah it's beautiful even it's just come and go. Anyway thanks for your comment! ^_^