Excellent tweet! Clean, concise, and gets me excited to play. I love the way you broke up the text & had emojis next to the key selling features - awesome job!
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Corpse Keeper's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall Pitch Quality | #1 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Engagement | #1 | 3.944 | 3.944 |
| Clarity | #6 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
| Unique Selling Point | #6 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Judge feedback
Judge feedback is anonymous and shown in a random order.
- Great Tweet Solid and professional press kit You need a link to your steam page from the itchio page I could only find it from the dev log
- Very nice press kit and clear pitch. The USP might use some clarification.
- Your text is great! I'd prefer to see a video/in game screenshots to see what is going on when reading your tweet.
- Feedback submitted as Indie Legion.
- It GOTH-ed me good, from beginning to end. I loved the squeamish score, degree of customization and insane combat system. However, I was also a little unclear on how the combat actually goes and the short, too fast segment in the trailer on the items did nothing to salve my confusion. But overall, my GOD!
- The concept explained within the presskit is a bit difficult to follow in the Gamescom trailer. It sounds very interesting when reading the kit or Steam page, but the trailer is edited very quickly that it's not clear it's a roster-based system.
- Stand out entry! Love the premise of the game and the visuals are very atmospheric. Great tweet, the Press Kit is nicely detailed and the Steam Trailer is visually stunning. Suggestions: -- Perhaps include more focus on your Unique Selling Point: we feel that building an army of the living dead is pretty unique so added it to the suggested tweet edit posted below (as Realms Games). -- Trailer could start with action to grab attention and then cut to various other scenes. Include the Trailer here too.
PitchYaPitch Tweet
https://twitter.com/mlclStudio/status/1451954322728579073
Press Kit Link (DevLog Update)
https://deathcathedral.github.io/presskit
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