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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Challenge | #8 | 3.474 | 3.714 |
| Composition | #11 | 3.341 | 3.571 |
| Mixing | #13 | 2.673 | 2.857 |
| Vibe | #13 | 3.474 | 3.714 |
| Overall | #13 | 3.180 | 3.400 |
| Creativity | #14 | 2.940 | 3.143 |
Ranked from 7 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Title
Afternoon Ambiance
Description
I didn't get any inspiration from the theme this time so I jumped into FL studio, set up a piano, sax and bass then tried to come up with a jazzy sounding song. I tried to go for easy listening jazz versus a hard, fast jazz sound which started to give cafe vibes. The background pic I went with was my last available free AI image lol so it is what it is.
First time trying to do a jazzy song, I really liked the experience and am overall happy with the turn out.
Plugins used
I used a new plug in: DSK Saxophones
Link(s) to your submission
https://youtu.be/YsEDDFnR9tY
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Comments
Some dynamics for the piano would have definetly improved the song (beat accents with velocity and stuff like that)
Also would have liked to hear more rythmic variation throughout the song.
AH, yes, I should have thought about that! I'll definitely do that when I come back to touch this one up. Thanks for the always direct areas I can improve in, I'm pretty green still so having specific things to fix helps me the most!
energetic and refreshing. The first sax sample is nice, but the one at 1:00 sounds kinda stanky, though the line you wrote for it is fine, and having the two harmonize briefly before 1:30 worked well.
Thanks! That second one is one of the built in ones in FL studio - I almost used it for the whole song lol glad I found that other one, but by the time I did, I had already gotten used to and like that stank lol
i like it! some of these chords are really cool, although i feel like the mix and arrangement could be improved a bit :0
Fun fact : I don't know if you're familiar with the Sims 1 soundtrack, but the buy mode 1 music has exactly the same chord progression at the same tonality.
I really like the kind of turnaround you created at 45". And when you put the two saxes together you've harmonically managed to fill the sound space in an elegant way. The music is really very pleasant to listen to.
The negative point is particularly obvious on the piano: lack of dynamics. All the notes are played with the same intensity. You'd gain in human feel with more variations.
I don't know what DAW you're using, but if there's a way to put some randomness into it, it might sound even better.
I played Sims 1, but YEARS ago :) What a compliment, thanks! That second sax kinda game me K.K. vibes from Animal Crossing lol
I appreciate all the positive feedback and that's a great callout on the piano! Those little details I need to incorporate into my mixing, editing and work flow and now knowing that I need to, half the battle is done! On this one in particular that human touch would have been perfect.
I use FL Studio with mostly out of the box plug ins - I've seen YT videos about how to add some randomness in there - I'll look into it!
I didn't hear a plate shattering randomly somewhere in the song 0/10 needed more broken dishes.
Sorry to disappoint, I'll let the cafe staff know to be better about not being good at their jobs :D
This is probably my favorite comment I've ever gotten about my music lol
I would go to a cafe that played this anytime. Drums felt a little lacking and maybe could have contributed more to the vibe, but I also liked the chill tone of everything. Nice work!
Thank you! I think drums may be one of my weakest instruments, I'll try to work on them for the next jam!
Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you liked the vibe!
This is nice, the cafe ambience in the background is a really nice touch!
Thank you! Fun fact lol that ambiance didn't happen until I was putting together the YT video :D Glad I went with my gut!