Really cool opening sequence. Absolutely loved it and had some really great atmosphere. I agree with the other comments from Turtlebox and the textures getting a little close elsewhere. Overall though, a really good composition!
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Really nice submissions, I really liked the last track as well. I thought the piano was balanced better in the second track, but the piano on the first track seemed to drown other instruments out and came across too loud (to me). I think slightly reducing the volume on it overall, would help balance the composition a bit better :)
Lovely composition, I really enjoyed the textures in it. My only observation is that your flutes in the lower registers get lost a little bit with the string textures over them. I would suggest bringing the volume of them up when they're in the lower registers and reducing the strings to help provide a better balance. :)
I liked it. It was very easy to listen and had a very easy going way about it. I would agree that you could have done more with it, possibly taking it off and developing it more. It felt like it was going to build into more and then didn't so it would have been nice to see where it took us.
The birds definitely added something to it as well.
This is a really nice submission. I think possibly there's a few strange chords in there that don't quite work as they cause some clashes. For my personal tastes I think you could actually go with a bit less in the orchestration as there seems to be a lot going on instrument wise in a short space of time which from a listening standpoint gets a little overwhelming. Otherwise though I think you've got something really interesting! :)
I really enjoyed this entry. Thank you! :). I thought that you really got the theme down and I thought the Japanese influence really shone through well. For me personally, I found the melody when it came in a little jarring. I think possibly because it was in 4th's against the bassline and the sort of jazzy element to the main theme. I think the balance was good though and I really enjoyed the overall feel :)