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A jam submission

Far Away - Dawn SubmissionView project page

Track for Impressions #2 submission
Submitted by Electriccaz — 4 days, 18 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Composing Quality#273.5633.810
Correlation to Theme#293.2963.524
Overall Uniqueness/Creativity (double field for weight)#323.0743.286
Overall#353.2743.500
Listenability#373.2523.476
Execution#403.1633.381
Overall Uniqueness/Creativity#433.2963.524

Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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https://soundcloud.com/cwatts87/far-away-dawn

Description
A relaxing, ambient track for Impressions #2

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Comments

Submitted

Absolutely loved how expressive the violin was! As somebody who can't play violin it always irks me that I have to use the DAW - whether you recorded yourself or not it felt awesome to listen to throughout

Submitted (1 edit)

I liked the textures in the violins; they added a lot. The ambience is also very good! I definitely see the video game inspiration and would like to see this inside a game!

HostSubmitted

Solid ambient track for sure. 

Some of the instruments still sound a bit artificial in the mix, but that's a lot of work to deal with, especially with limited tools.

Great work! :)

Submitted

I really liked this, very soothing. the only criticism I have is with the violin(cello maybe?). it is a bit loud in my opinion, but I think you should keep it there, just make it a little quieter.

Submitted

I love the variety instrumentally. I do agree with everyone on the cello, it sticks out a bit and kinda throws off the balance you have everywhere else. 

Submitted

Very nice ambient and minimalist track. Very well mixed. For the cello, I suggest you to play with expression and modulation if your plugin allows it, it will help alot especially when you jump from a note to another so it does not sound too stiff. Good job !

Submitted

I love cello, I'm not sure what resources you used but I think you can improve it, I recommend this solo cello legato library if you use full kontakt, it's free

Submitted

https://www.performancesamples.com/pacific-solocellolegato/

Developer(+1)

Thanks so much for this feedback! I definitely wasn't totally happy with the cello so will check out this library!

Submitted

Beautiful textures and harmonies, you've created a really nice motif out of the interaction between the instruments.  For such a minimal arrangement, it sounds very full.  I like the noisy fuzz in the koto-like plucked instrument.  When the cello comes in at 1:47, it's really jarring and almost hurts my ears though. 

Developer

Thanks so much for the feedback. I agree about the cello. I wasn't totally happy with it and wonder if it was the right instrument choice! Definitely food for thought for the future 🙂

Submitted

Beautiful textures and harmonies, you've created a really nice motif out of the interaction between the instruments.  For such a minimal arrangement, it sounds very full.  I like the noisy fuzz in the koto-like plucked instrument.  When the cello comes in at 1:47, it's really jarring and almost hurts my ears though. 

Submitted

Hey really nice song! I thought the cello did get a bit outta control by the end of the track, but overall pretty balanced :)

Developer

Thanks so much! I agree about the cello. Didn't totally feel happy with it so will definitely look to edit it in the future ☺️ 

Submitted

Very lovely submission. Fantastic job.

Developer

Thank you very much, that's very kind. I really appreciate it 😊