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Thanks for your feedback!

Indeed, maybe it's not the best choice to work on the other enemies, rather than concentrate on the one given.

Yes, I tried to convey several stages of a boss fight, like an energetic Shoot Them Up. 

Your comment makes me happy... thanks!

The intro sets a mystical yet strange mood. I can feel the heaviness in your theme and the intensity when the tempo picks up. The sounds and style used remind me of Synthwave... which doesn't displease me!

Great track!

It perhaps lacks a little variation and seems repetitive at times... I'm not a master of this style of music, so don't take my commentary at face value.

But the choice of electric guitar and the energy of the style go well with Yuwal's theme.

Your theme has an airy side that leads to uncertainty, as in the realm of pigeons... and then the danger of the encounter.

Your theme is well transcribed with your intentions.

Good work!

Thanks! Glad you commented on the synths. I particularly worked on them with a lot of difficulty (but I'm not completely satisfied). They are created from snare or hi-hat.
I'm glad you find the track consistent with the theme.

And I hadn't noticed... we took part in Town Music Jam #3.

I liked your work... you're a good competitor! ;)

I’m glad you felt my intentions in the theme of my music.

Thanks for your review!

Interesting the style with the accordion and I think I hear a cooing in the background on this part that gives a tension.

And then comes such an energetic and positive section.

Well done!

The harp, voice, bell are a good combo.

I like your music, it gives me this feeling after a fight. Like everyone’s done by Yuwal and he’s been wreaking havoc... there’s no hope.

It is definitely emotional!

The sequence of the first two sections is a bit peculiar.

The choice of intruders is cool, and I love the part at 0:29

There are good energetic parties and other epic ones.

It makes you want to go to battle... I like that!

The stereotype of the pigeon is very real, in France some call it "the scourge of cities" and especially in Paris.

The accordion plays a style typical of the musettes of Paris.

This suits very well with pigeons by the thousands!

The mix of instruments is original... as the description! :)

I like the epic side, there is evolution and variation.

Especially at 2:34!

Well done!

Your theme with the instruments you use (especially violin and bell) reminds me a theme of Final Fantasy 7... I don’t know which one. I like it!

The part of false hope makes me feel more a happy and melancholic passage at the same time... almost like after winning "the great final fight", but that some things will unfortunately change forever.

I love your work!

Your music gives that feeling that Yuwal put you in a state similar to torpor.

The drums seem repetitive, some variations would be welcome.

Interesting!

The set is fun... Gloo is stupid but inspiring! :)

The music is catchy and fits Gloo's description well.

"Come on!" :)

The theme is interesting, but a little short. It deserves to be developed further.
Even if Gloo looks stupid, he deserves it ;)

The style used for his theme is original and well produced, even if the sadder passages make me think less of a friendly confrontation on the dance floor :)

I feel bad for him!

It's a funny idea, well done!

Mission accomplished, glad you're done.  :-)

Thanks to you!

The tension is palpable, the piano game maintains well that.

What is the background sound you hear from the beginning that comes back regularly? It sounds like the turkey chuckle. It’s more audible at 0:29, but this is like a moan.

I like the passage of percussion almost solo towards the middle which makes think of intense heartbeats.

The end represents the confusion that can generate 1000 pigeons.

I got the goosebumps... nice job!

The project is interesting, the change with the accordion is original.

There is a discrepancy between certain elements, and others are masked in the mix... But I like your idea of the theme!

Wow! Your song is really complete with softer passages than others, change of tempo and many other changes or evolution.

I really like this drum games!

Really good job!

The whole is well orchestrated with a lot of energy for a fight, I like the variations.

Only one part that bothers me a little at 1:54 repeated a second time later... kind of sad melancholy that contrasts with the energy of the fight.

Good work it’s a living music!

My feelings are in line with what has already been said in previous comments.

Nice work!

The intro announcing the enemy, then the appearance and unfolding of the enemy, with the feeling of being overwhelmed and cornered... really oppressed all the way through!

With a touch of despair for the man about to face the 1,000 pigeons.

Congratulations on your music!

Indeed, I preferred to make this unconventional ending so that it could loop at the very beginning or at 0:54.

I understand that it gives the impression of being waiting for something to happen next.

You're well organized for listening and scoring! Gathering all the songs and converting them is a real job. I admit I'm not as assiduous, but I agree with you about the number of listens... 3x minimum.

I like that it's upbeat and sustained, then becomes a little more ominous.

Each break gives the impression of an uncertain outcome, and their relaunch puts the theme back into focus and is motivating.

On the other hand, I couldn't find the large number of 1000 pigeons in the style.

It's a good track with a good mix! Congratulations

I find your music original, and it works well to set an oppressive mood.

Nice use of texture in the high notes. I like the eerie, horrific, dirty feel.

Great job!

The choice of NES 8-bit sound doesn't seem easy... but you've produced a song with interesting style on these birds.

Nice music!

It was nice of you to take the time to listen to the other songs, they were done to see if I could work on the other enemies.

If you want to share your opinion on this one, don't hesitate. From my point of view, it's moderately successful. 

But I had a lot of fun!

Thanks for your feedback!

It's a pleasure to see you again on this Jam, having enjoyed your work at the Town Music Jam.

I try not to make it redundant, although it still is a bit. It still lacks variation, and the track could be a little longer.

I'm glad that my initial objective was generally understood, despite my choice to use only my small sample pack.

Why do you find the ending a bit surprising?

Thanks for your feedback on my work, don't hesitate if you have the time and inclination to review my other tracks. Whether positive or negative.

I'd love to hear from you!

Nice mixing job on such a good song.

It evolves correctly, taking us through several states and situations.

The sound effect of growling and sticky glue immerses you even more.

Congratulations!

The feel of your track corresponds to your original intention.

Nice job!

What a surprise.... I love it!
Makes you happy all day long.

Not downloadable!?

I didn't expect to hear this style from Yuwal... you surprised me.

In any case, it's well composed!

Nice track!

Good job! I like the break at 0:53.

You can feel the oppression and tension.

Ends a little too abruptly.

Yeah! The intro gives me goosebumps, and the change to dyphonic vocals at 1:30 is a really good idea!

Great job!

I feel the threat!

Too bad I don't have the track for download.

Nice work!