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Are you 100% sure the text is yours? It matches typical AI rhyme scheme & grammar style.

Also... what does it have to do with the theme?

I forgot to submit myself, but I do want to say that using AI for this is loser behavior

thank you for the quality feedback :)

hahaha!! i'm glad someone else sees that comparison

love the high quality feedback, thank you :)

i finally have time to check some other submissions, i'll start with you!

comments like these are what keeps me going :,,)

Oh yeah, I agree a ton on the panning!  I didn't pay attention to that even once while writing! I'll keep this in mind!

Quite goofy in my opinion! Fun listen!

Haha it's crazy how everyone calls my tracks FNAF. I have a similar one called Droplet Plank (far more electronic focused) that has also gotten that comment lol

Thank you so much for the comment :)

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World Of Memory - Beautiful textures in the intro, I love that kind of sound design. Very ambient style. The fullness when it starts building of is beautiful :) So many beautiful instruments and textures all over, and that plucky thing at 2:22 is very delightful. Close to tears here.. seriously

Colorsplash Beach - It fits perfectly as a beach theme! It's very joyful and has just the right groove  :)

Fight To Remember - Wow... this intro feels like it's really leading up to something. Then it does!! I appreciate the bass here ;D A perfect dramatic theme, the percussive elements ~1:06 are absolutely incredible, what a track here :D

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World Of Memory - Beautiful textures in the intro, I love that kind of sound design. Very ambient style. The fullness when it starts building of is beautiful :) So many beautiful instruments and textures all over, and that plucky thing at 2:22 is very delightful. Close to tears here.. seriously

Colorsplash Beach - It fits perfectly as a beach theme! It's very joyful and has just the right groove  :)

Fight To Remember - Wow... this intro feels like it's really leading up to something. Then it does!! I appreciate the bass here ;D A perfect dramatic theme, the percussive elements ~1:06 are absolutely incredible, what a track here :D

thank you so much :)

i'm glad to hear all this, it's exactly as intended!!

Pan Flute And Dragon - Love that intro. Really feels like something big. Composition of the rest is quite interesting as well. The harmony is a little odd in a few points - but it works out well.

Take a Rest - It fits the name well! Chill.

The Nightmare - Again, fitting of its name. Super dark and nightmarish. 

The Sleepy Sleepless Village: A pretty chill track. A few jazz moments in there, was quite interesting haha! Definitely feels like a night time track to me.

Temple - What an ominous sound. Very atmospheric.

Ascention - Definitely an ascending feeling going on here!

Ant To All, A Good Night - Got a jazzier feeling than the other one. Then, the other orchestration kicks in. It works very nicely!

Pan Flute And Dragon - Love that intro. Really feels like something big. Composition of the rest is quite interesting as well. The harmony is a little odd in a few points - but it works out well.

Take a Rest - It fits the name well! Chill.

The Nightmare - Again, fitting of its name. Super dark and nightmarish. 

The Sleepy Sleepless Village: A pretty chill track. A few jazz moments in there, was quite interesting haha! Definitely feels like a night time track to me.

Temple - What an ominous sound. Very atmospheric.

Ascention - Definitely an ascending feeling going on here!

Ant To All, A Good Night - Got a jazzier feeling than the other one. Then, the other orchestration kicks in. It works very nicely!

MY GOD indeed. A goofy beat! Cover art is sick as hell.

(I wrote these live as I listened!) (Also.. I might be a little biased as I have a *VERY* particular interest in pirates.)

Corsair's Oath - What a sick intro. Quite the soundscape here. I can see the pirates now, boarding the ship.. It's chill yet very grand.

All Peg Legs On Deck - Now the pace is picking up! I can really feel this one.

Blood And Thunder - There's the drama I like to hear in a pirate soundtrack. Big and ominous! This is where I imagine some battle occurs.. or even an epic Kraken clash >:D

A Rival's Lament - So beautiful. Your description does it better than I could :D

Overall, it's all highly professional. Beautiful composition.

(I wrote these live as I listened!)
(Also.. I might be a little biased as I have a *VERY* particular interest in pirates.)

Corsair's Oath - What a sick intro. Quite the soundscape here. I can see the pirates now, boarding the ship.. It's chill yet very grand.

All Peg Legs On Deck - Now the pace is picking up! I can really feel this one.

Blood And Thunder - There's the drama I like to hear in a pirate soundtrack. Big and ominous! This is where I imagine some battle occurs.. or even an epic Kraken clash >:D

A Rival's Lament - So beautiful. Your description does it better than I could :D

Overall, it's all highly professional. Beautiful composition.

Protocol.Realize - Super sick scary stuff. Love where the orchestral drums start kicking in.

Waking Up - In the intro, there's already some beautiful textures and glitches taking place all over. So many little delightful noises, I especially like that little high wet chirping noise haha

Damage Control - Definitely feels like a continuation of the previous track. The fullness in this one is impressive.

Sneak - A very sneaky track indeed. The percussion here is top notch (seems to be a recurring theme here, the percussion in all of these so far have been absolutely perfect)

Combat - The textures at the beginning are amazing. Then it starts getting really scary. Feels like I'm fighting something very large. (I assume those textures at the start and end are done with a spectral gate - it works so well!)

Protocol.Exit - Quite chill compared to most of the tracks. That synth is pretty funky lol.

Cinematic Trailer - Sure matches the title. This is seriously impressive, the sounds all over, everything all together mixing just right, the atmosphere it brings. I could see this in a trailer.

I can't express enough how impressive this all is. You've done amazing here.

Protocol.Realize - Super sick scary stuff. Love where the orchestral drums start kicking in.

Waking Up - In the intro, there's already some beautiful textures and glitches taking place all over. So many little delightful noises, I especially like that little high wet chirping noise haha

Damage Control - Definitely feels like a continuation of the previous track. The fullness in this one is impressive.

Sneak - A very sneaky track indeed. The percussion here is top notch (seems to be a recurring theme here, the percussion in all of these so far have been absolutely perfect)

Combat - The textures at the beginning are amazing. Then it starts getting really scary. Feels like I'm fighting something very large. (I assume those textures at the start and end are done with a spectral gate - it works so well!)

Protocol.Exit - Quite chill compared to most of the tracks. That synth is pretty funky lol.

Cinematic Trailer - Sure matches the title. This is seriously impressive, the sounds all over, everything all together mixing just right, the atmosphere it brings. I could see this in a trailer.

I can't express enough how impressive this all is. You've done amazing here.

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1 - WOW! The water samples are my favorite. So much all around creativity here. It really starts feeling dramatic. Quite an emotional roller coaster. A very very strong start.

2 - Very very mysterious intro. Quite dramatic as well. Beautiful :)

3 - A joyful intro! So many little textures all over the place! Beautiful and ambient. Absolutely impressive.

I have nothing I'd add to these tracks. They are seriously impressive on their own. This is a very beautiful soundtrack. Guaranteed top 20.. ;)

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1 - WOW! The water samples are my favorite. So much all around creativity here. It really starts feeling dramatic. Quite an emotional roller coaster. A very very strong start.

2 - Very very mysterious intro. Quite dramatic as well. Beautiful :)

3 - A joyful intro! So many little textures all over the place! Beautiful and ambient. Absolutely impressive.

I have nothing I'd add to these tracks. They are seriously impressive on their own. This is a very beautiful soundtrack. Guaranteed top 20.. ;)

(I write this as I listen! I used the YouTube video so I can't be certain which track is which!)

Starts off so beautiful. The composition here is wonderful. All the instruments fit together so well. And that little texture is wonderful.

2nd part - A little granular feeling! All the chirping of those wind instruments (forgive me.. that's oboe?) and the little clinking texture.. then the bass kicks in. What a full and textural track!

3rd part - A synth intro! The granular textures are all over the place with this one! So much ear candy! I love those little vocal things too! The piano sweeps are a joy! 

4th part - Whistly intro! Love those weak high notes on the piano. Then - WOW!! The big soundscape that follows.. it's beautiful!! It feels grand! Beautiful!! 

This is one of those submissions where I seriously hope you reach the top 20 :)

(I write this as I listen! I used the YouTube video so I can't be certain which track is which!)

Starts off so beautiful. The composition here is wonderful. All the instruments fit together so well. And that little texture is wonderful.

2nd part - A little granular feeling! All the chirping of those wind instruments (forgive me.. that's oboe?) and the little clinking texture.. then the bass kicks in. What a full and textural track!

3rd part - A synth intro! The granular textures are all over the place with this one! So much ear candy! I love those little vocal things too! The piano sweeps are a joy! 

4th part - Whistly intro! Love those weak high notes on the piano. Then - WOW!! The big soundscape that follows.. it's beautiful!! It feels grand! Beautiful!! 

This is one of those submissions where I seriously hope you reach the top 20 :)

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Love that fade-in intro. Beautiful with that flute.

WOW those little bits all over ... WOW!! Love some orchestral stuff like this. Joyful all around!! These instruments are beautiful! The composition is extraordinary! You can really feel the story come together. Top 20 for sure!

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Love that fade-in intro. Beautiful with that flute.

WOW those little bits all over ... WOW!! Love some orchestral stuff like this. Joyful all around!! These instruments are beautiful! The composition is extraordinary! You can really feel the story come together. Top 20 for sure!

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Sanctuary - 4 stars

Such a chill start! Sounds like some sort of menu, lobby, or main hub of a game to me. Lovely composition.

Maci's Place - 4 stars

Funky chill track! Has quite a different vibe than the other one - but absolutely feels like the same game! Quite idle and lovely.

Temporal Platforms - 4.5 stars

More energetic compared to the other ones. Feels like it's got some real action to it!

Overall - a lovely chill soundtrack you've got going here. Keep it up!!

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Sanctuary - 4 stars

Such a chill start! Sounds like some sort of menu, lobby, or main hub of a game to me. Lovely composition.

Maci's Place - 4 stars

Funky chill track! Has quite a different vibe than the other one - but absolutely feels like the same game! Quite idle and lovely.

Temporal Platforms - 4.5 stars

More energetic compared to the other ones. Feels like it's got some real action to it!

Overall - a lovely chill soundtrack you've got going here. Keep it up!!

(I write this as I listen!) The intro is a little ominous. Love that so much. The synth that kicks in alleviates that a bit! Gets quite interesting as it goes on. Very simplistic overall. I love the different phases it goes through. About the last third is my favorite with that slidy synth. Nice work :)

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The intro is a little ominous. Love that so much. The synth that kicks in alleviates that a bit! Gets quite interesting as it goes on. Very simplistic overall. I love the different phases it goes through. About the last third is my favorite with that slidy synth. Nice work :)

(Wow, that's a ton of tracks. Forgive me if it's a tiny bit less detailed than my other reviews!)

(I write these live as I listen!)

1 - The Past Is Best Cherished - 3.8 stars

A joyful sounding intro. Starts sounding a bit more dramatic.. now the piano's going louder! Lovely composition. My only dislike.. not enough range in the frequencies! I wanted to hear some low notes in this track! It's lovely though!

2 - Hellen's Hello - 3.5 stars

Haha.. I know what track this references. Nothing against some inspiration - you made it sound good! Docking a very small amount for creativity though.. sorry!

3 - Home Away From Home - 4 stars

Beautiful! I love a good waltz. A good chord progression too! A finer instrument selection than the others as well.

4 - Welcome Home - 4 stars

So joyful and familiar, like a little music box! Very simple!

5 - Nightmare Fight - 4.5 stars

WOAH!! It comes at you all at once! Cymbal is a bit loud compared to the other stuff, and I'd love more clarity on that snare. Absolutely sick though! Feels like an N64 boss battle..

6 - Hellen's Goodbye - 4 stars

Very emotional and simplistic. This chord progression always gets me, haha

7 - Out Of Town - 4.3 stars

A slightly different feel than the rest! Another track with more variety in instruments. And, another waltz! Lovely!

8 - Unnecessary Tension 3.8 stars

Orchestral Hit melody feels a little off.. but then when the other instruments kick in the tension really sets in.

9 - Your Unfathomably Furry And Friendly Sheep Friend, Sheepie - 4 stars

Another time where I recognize the inspiration haha.. what a goofy track. Very silly.

10 - Sheepville - 3.8 stars

Keeps the motif of the last one! Goofy as ever :)

11 - Cave Of Dreams - 4.5 stars

So spooky, yet has that classic inspirational chord progression :) Love the little droplets, it really sells the idea of a cave

12 - Feeling Watched - 4 stars

Wow.. very very spooky. Feels like disc 11 with those little block placing-like sounds

13 - Yourself - 3.5 stars

Another dark track. Super dissonant, but that dissonance is used to your advantage. It works pretty well.

14 - RUN - 4.5 stars

Definitely makes you want to RUN.

15 - A Place Mysteriously Located in a Far side of the Cave - 4 stars

Keeping to that cave theme with more droplets. It works well! Similar to the other cave track. Love the delayed melody synth once again.

16 - More Unnecessary Tension - 4

Better executed than the other tension track.

17 - Your Unusually Furious And Fier - 4.8 

Wow, what a shift! The composition is absolutely sick in here! So dramatic!

18 - Best of Friends - 3.8

Back to that sheep theme again :) Funny and silly

19 - Dream Factory - 3.5 

Very simplistic intro. A little bit dissonant as it goes on!

20 - Elevator Bop - 5 Haha, I really do feel like I'm on an elevator! My favorite so far. Such a cool track. Favorite so far. Love the sound effects.

21 - Echoes From a Hopeful Reality - 4

Love this chord progression! It is a little bit hopeful, but some chords make it feel a little more dreadful!

22 - Fight Yourself - 4.5

Love this chord progression once again! The orchestration is sick, these instruments work nicely together. The energy is focused and booming!

23 - One Last Goodbye - 3.8

Another joyful thing, this time a little more simplistic. Nice work!

Overall - very soundfonty haha. I can feel the effort put into this! (Was just a little hard to listen due to its length.. haha.)

(Wow, that's a ton of tracks. Forgive me if it's a tiny bit less detailed than my other reviews!)

(I write these live as I listen!)

1 - The Past Is Best Cherished - 3.8 stars

A joyful sounding intro. Starts sounding a bit more dramatic.. now the piano's going louder! Lovely composition. My only dislike.. not enough range in the frequencies! I wanted to hear some low notes in this track! It's lovely though!

2 - Hellen's Hello - 3.5 stars

Haha.. I know what track this references. Nothing against some inspiration - you made it sound good! Docking a very small amount for creativity though.. sorry!

3 - Home Away From Home - 4 stars

Beautiful! I love a good waltz. A good chord progression too! A finer instrument selection than the others as well.

4 - Welcome Home - 4 stars

So joyful and familiar, like a little music box! Very simple!

5 - Nightmare Fight - 4.5 stars

WOAH!! It comes at you all at once! Cymbal is a bit loud compared to the other stuff, and I'd love more clarity on that snare. Absolutely sick though! Feels like an N64 boss battle..

6 - Hellen's Goodbye - 4 stars

Very emotional and simplistic. This chord progression always gets me, haha

7 - Out Of Town - 4.3 stars

A slightly different feel than the rest! Another track with more variety in instruments. And, another waltz! Lovely!

8 - Unnecessary Tension 3.8 stars

Orchestral Hit melody feels a little off.. but then when the other instruments kick in the tension really sets in.

9 - Your Unfathomably Furry And Friendly Sheep Friend, Sheepie - 4 stars

Another time where I recognize the inspiration haha.. what a goofy track. Very silly.

10 - Sheepville - 3.8 stars

Keeps the motif of the last one! Goofy as ever :)

11 - Cave Of Dreams - 4.5 stars

So spooky, yet has that classic inspirational chord progression :) Love the little droplets, it really sells the idea of a cave

12 - Feeling Watched - 4 stars

Wow.. very very spooky. Feels like disc 11 with those little block placing-like sounds

13 - Yourself - 3.5 stars

Another dark track. Super dissonant, but that dissonance is used to your advantage. It works pretty well.

14 - RUN - 4.5 stars

Definitely makes you want to RUN.

15 - A Place Mysteriously Located in a Far side of the Cave - 4 stars

Keeping to that cave theme with more droplets. It works well! Similar to the other cave track. Love the delayed melody synth once again.

16 - More Unnecessary Tension - 4

Better executed than the other tension track.

17 - Your Unusually Furious And Fier - 4.8 

Wow, what a shift! The composition is absolutely sick in here! So dramatic!

18 - Best of Friends - 3.8

Back to that sheep theme again :) Funny and silly

19 - Dream Factory - 3.5 

Very simplistic intro. A little bit dissonant as it goes on!

20 - Elevator Bop - 5

Haha, I really do feel like I'm on an elevator! My favorite so far. Such a cool track. Favorite so far. Love the sound effects.

21 - Echoes From a Hopeful Reality - 4

Love this chord progression! It is a little bit hopeful, but some chords make it feel a little more dreadful!

22 - Fight Yourself - 4.5

Love this chord progression once again! The orchestration is sick, these instruments work nicely together. The energy is focused and booming!

23 - One Last Goodbye - 3.8

Another joyful thing, this time a little more simplistic. Nice work!

Overall - very soundfonty haha. I can feel the effort put into this! (Was just a little hard to listen due to its length.. haha.)

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1 - The Dream-Child (Title Screen) - 4 stars

Very simple and dreamy. Beautiful soft melody, those little spectral textures are my favorite thing in the entire world xD Splendid composition here.

2 -  Ren's Dream - 4 stars

Follows a very similar theme. Slightly faster paced. Another joyful melody, slightly more complex in a way. Lovely!!

3 - Dream Passages - 5 stars

Wow - that synth is awesome. My favorite so far. This is super emotionally impactful for me. What a landscape of sound!

4 - Sakura's Dream - 5 stars

Beautiful intro already, more spectral textures, a little bit of cymbal even! I love descending chord progressions like that. Then - WOW! Suddenly the energy hits you. These chords.. whaattt?! That's sick! Then the energy dies down.. and comes back yet again. Wow, what a track, what a track :)

5 - Dream Passages 2 - 4 stars

Chill track, love the chill percussion, composition is amazing, not much I can say I haven't already said :)

6 - Mom's Dream - 5 stars

Woah, kicking right in with those textures yet again ;) Lovely composition here, a little bit uneasy but powerful and forward. Beautiful, and as it progresses it keeps itself feeling fresh. Beautiful!

Overall, it's very coherent and all feels like the same game. A soundtrack to be remembered, for sure. I could see most of these tracks in big, worldwide games.. good work :)

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1. The Mansion - 4 stars

A chill yet spooky track. Very uneasy. Progresses very well! The more upbeat style drums were a surprise. Starting to lose its uneasiness, but still a bit of dissonance. More instruments are kicking in, still a little spooky and dissonant! The fade back to nothingness is beautiful. 4 stars overall as the dissonance could have been executed slightly better.

2. The Street - 5 stars

Strong start, lovely choir, high quality drums! Love the little rising synth, the background synth is fun as well. The subtle guitar kicking in is awesome! Piano was quite a surprise and sounds amazing with the track. That synth too! Beautiful! Love the abrupt reverse piano ending.

3. The Lake - 5 Stars

Beautiful piano intro. Definitely feels like a lake. Absolutely beautiful chords, harmony and a little bit of dissonance, executed much better than the mansion. That buildup really comes at you, it hits so emotionally. The emotional impact.. wow :) 

4. The Hall - 4 Stars

Wow.. this percussion is very unique. So much to take in in this track, so many little bits and bobs to feel. Very focused on those percussive elements.

5. The End - 5 stars

Wow. What an intro.. it's already hitting emotionally. The background textures, the high piano bits, even the title.. wow. Composition is amazing. The little synth background chords are wonderful. The violins kicking in... wow!! I'm in love with this one. It's so dramatic! I so wish the chords matched the little modulation in the piano at 3:03.. oh well. What a beautiful track.

Final Rating - 5 stars

(I write these as I listen!)

1. The Mansion - 4 stars

A chill yet spooky track. Very uneasy. Progresses very well! The more upbeat style drums were a surprise. Starting to lose its uneasiness, but still a bit of dissonance. More instruments are kicking in, still a little spooky and dissonant! The fade back to nothingness is beautiful. 4 stars overall as the dissonance could have been executed slightly better.

2. The Street - 5 stars

Strong start, lovely choir, high quality drums! Love the little rising synth, the background synth is fun as well. The subtle guitar kicking in is awesome! Piano was quite a surprise and sounds amazing with the track. That synth too! Beautiful! Love the abrupt reverse piano ending.

3. The Lake - 5 Stars

Beautiful piano intro. Definitely feels like a lake. Absolutely beautiful chords, harmony and a little bit of dissonance, executed much better than the mansion. That buildup really comes at you, it hits so emotionally. The emotional impact.. wow :)

4. The Hall - 4 Stars

Wow.. this percussion is very unique. So much to take in in this track, so many little bits and bobs to feel. Very focused on those percussive elements.

5. The End - 5 stars

Wow. What an intro.. it's already hitting emotionally. The background textures, the high piano bits, even the title.. wow. Composition is amazing. The little synth background chords are wonderful. The violins kicking in... wow!! I'm in love with this one. It's so dramatic! I so wish the chords matched the little modulation in the piano at 3:03.. oh well. What a beautiful track.

Final Rating - 5 stars